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UchihaFanatic
UchihaFanaticAuthor4yr
2020-11-13 21:28

Alright so I wanted to address something. Some people has been hating on the fact that I nerfed the mc by having his devil fruit abilities run on chakra... But personally I think it makes sense considering the fact that he is in the Naruto world. I don't really care much about it since this book was inspired by the novel 'The Strongest Hokage' which is about someone gaining the abilities of the Gura Gura no mi(whitebeard's devil fruit) in the naruto world. And like my fic, its mc also consumes chakra to use his devil fruit ability. SO I'm just saying, if you don't like it then this story is not for you but I won't change it. If it's not your preference then by all means drop my story. Besides I am not forcing anyone to read it aight author out.

Shinobi Life!

UchihaFanatic
4.5
29 Chs

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leo26
leo26Lv12

That you for addressing it,I was scared to read since ppl were saying you nerfed the mc but since it only ties his abilities with chakra, then it's fine to me, afterall can't be a god since the start.

4yr
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GodlyRuler
GodlyRulerLv4

waiting on next chapter.....

4yr
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Milkyone
MilkyoneLv6

that cool and all but I just don't understand how his chakra keep fluctuate before he could use the body technique to strengthen his body is chakra would go up each time he empty and refill it but now that he is using the technique along with observation haki and armament kaki one for training body and the other for spirit which is what make up chakra should his chakra not raise faster by combining them together??

4yr
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UchihaFanatic
UchihaFanaticAuthor

damn...m8 ur right. U know I actually remember someone commenting about that but it was when I was about to sleep so I probably forgot about it. So my bad I stupid, I'll increase his chakra more in the upcoming chapters. Thx for pointing that out and making me remember btw.

Milkyone:that cool and all but I just don't understand how his chakra keep fluctuate before he could use the body technique to strengthen his body is chakra would go up each time he empty and refill it but now that he is using the technique along with observation haki and armament kaki one for training body and the other for spirit which is what make up chakra should his chakra not raise faster by combining them together??
4yr
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Milkyone
MilkyoneLv6

don't worry about it, this story is a great read and also interesting. so if I can give some input that is appreciated it all for the better. P.S that comment you mention before is probably from me.

4yr
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UchihaFanatic
UchihaFanaticAuthor

aight bet, then sorry for forgetting about ur comment XD

Milkyone:don't worry about it, this story is a great read and also interesting. so if I can give some input that is appreciated it all for the better. P.S that comment you mention before is probably from me.
4yr
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UchihaFanatic
UchihaFanaticAuthor

aight, tho I won't guarantee you will like it, since everyone has a different preference on what they like. You're welcome to give it a try and it's also perfectly fine if you do end up dropping it. :)

leo26:That you for addressing it,I was scared to read since ppl were saying you nerfed the mc but since it only ties his abilities with chakra, then it's fine to me, afterall can't be a god since the start.
4yr
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Kokushibou
KokushibouLv4

The only problem i have, is that you give yourself 2 low star reviews. I hate when Author's do stuff like that.

UchihaFanatic:aight, tho I won't guarantee you will like it, since everyone has a different preference on what they like. You're welcome to give it a try and it's also perfectly fine if you do end up dropping it. :)
4yr
crazy_son
crazy_sonLv4

well he actually did nerf the MC actually in the second chapter that is and just saying for you to understand that he doesn't have any semblance of power levels...

leo26:That you for addressing it,I was scared to read since ppl were saying you nerfed the mc but since it only ties his abilities with chakra, then it's fine to me, afterall can't be a god since the start.
4yr
Shubhamtripathi033
Shubhamtripathi033Lv14

will you all please shut up if you have so many problems with the novel then please don't ruin others mood by commenting shit. you guys can go and watch all shits where mc goes around fucking and raping women you will like those kinds of novels in their comments you will post good good good good good... ...... so please shut the **** up

4yr
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boread
boreadLv6

So, why did the author himself give 3 stars in his review? 🤔

4yr
grandis
grandisLv13

so authy is this story being dropped?

4yr
3hadow
3hadowLv12

author i recommend you change your rating to 5 star cause you are really bringing down you novels overall rating. and low ratings can make potential readers reluctant to try to read your book.

4yr
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Gentle_Cat
Gentle_CatLv13

He's in naruto world, but his ability is not from that world so it should not run on chakra, that's what many people thought that's why they hated it when you run it on chakra(i think)... I like your ff anyway so i'mma keep reading it

4yr
DemiseGE
DemiseGELv11

Difference is the gura gura is paramacia, thus not constantly active and doesnt have logia abilties of intangibility as onw of its strengths Secondly if u wanna apply devil fruit in this way use a unique devil fruit that would give the mc an actual bloodline instead of a glorified basic affinity as a bloodline. Dont say ur using aomething from another anime to raise expectations and then put it as a slightly(if at all) diff version of basic(comparitively) technique in the narutoverse, with no real unique characteristics of its own.

4yr
Might_Cho
Might_ChoLv14

so what df you use ? well I will check it out

4yr
Hussein_King
Hussein_KingLv3

Please please update

3yr
SeraphicPromise
SeraphicPromiseLv3

Author san .. Have u dropped this fic?Is that why it is marked complete ?

2yr
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UchihaFanatic
UchihaFanaticAuthor

I'm the author of this fanfic. I was actually quite scared to post it at first but whatever. As a fan of the Naruto franchise I wanted to write a fanfic but at the same time I thought I might butcher it. Anyway the fanfic is a non harem, so it's only a single pairing. Also don't misunderstand, the mc doesn't have a system, just a status checker to monitor his strength or check the strengths of others. Just wanna say this is like my third fanfic, but it might not be updated often cuz I still have to write for my other 2 fics. The only reason I wrote this is because I got a sudden Idea that I couldn't get rid of even after a few weeks.

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Omipotent_reader
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Has a great potential. I need more more more more more more more more more more more more More more more more more more more more more more minutes of

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Areize
AreizeLv5

don't read recommend this the MC wishes are basically trash ones in Naruto world the author seems a one piece wanker if it was harem it might have a chance but now it seems garbage

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Quid_the_leach
Quid_the_leachLv5

I'm going to be honest. I expected nothing, nothing at all when I headed into this. Gotta say that I got pleasantly surprised. The author managed to avoid the trap where the characters get their personalities warped to fit the story. Surprisingly, they all mostly stay true to their own character. I like the small interactions our mc has with the side characters (especially the Ino-Shika-Cho trio and Gai). It's the little things that matter. Hopefully we'll keep this pace through the novel. A lot of fanfic writers get impatient when there's a lack of action and try to rush things. Good job! Keep up the good work!

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NewGoldie
NewGoldieLv14

Reveal spoiler

4yr
Evil_For_the_WIN
Evil_For_the_WINLv5

I had too much expectations at the beginning then there was all those nerfing and shit. When I calmed down and lowered my expectations, I enjoyed it. Plus Ino is my preferred girl between Sakura, Hinata,... But I liked her behavior so her slight OOC moments are horrible for me. Also, I think I will hate MC soon enough. For now, I can recommend it.

4yr
crazy_son
crazy_sonLv4

I don't really give reviews to ffs so this is new to me but here we go. I have read till chap 6 and I think that should be enough to get interested in a ff or a story really but I am not getting any good vibe from this so I have given it 3 stars in writing quality it would have been higher if he didn't make those petty mistakes in the beginning and ****ed up powerscaling was written better and the MC wasn't nerfed... the story dev got 2 cause cause well the story isn't original and he didn't really change anything that much the story didn't change that much even though there is a new character involved in the plot... character design is 1 cause well you get the point and the oc didn't have a design that stands out... world back ground is 2 cause it might get better there is potential... update stability has not been seen here since the day of dawn... p.s: I didn't hate it but it is too generic and I think it will be a waste of time if I read anymore Soo bye...thanks for an alright read.

4yr
lycke
lyckeLv10

very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others

4yr
Avarice_of_Greed
Avarice_of_GreedLv12

It's alright so far. I thought it would be generic at first because of the whole guy meets being that gives you wishes trope, but I was surprised that I enjoyed it. A few errors here and there but all around readable, hopefully the quality doesn't drop.

4yr
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