Alright so I wanted to address something. Some people has been hating on the fact that I nerfed the mc by having his devil fruit abilities run on chakra... But personally I think it makes sense considering the fact that he is in the Naruto world. I don't really care much about it since this book was inspired by the novel 'The Strongest Hokage' which is about someone gaining the abilities of the Gura Gura no mi(whitebeard's devil fruit) in the naruto world. And like my fic, its mc also consumes chakra to use his devil fruit ability. SO I'm just saying, if you don't like it then this story is not for you but I won't change it. If it's not your preference then by all means drop my story. Besides I am not forcing anyone to read it aight author out.

Has a great potential. I need more more more more more more more more more more more more More more more more more more more more more more minutes of

don't read recommend this the MC wishes are basically trash ones in Naruto world the author seems a one piece wanker if it was harem it might have a chance but now it seems garbage

I'm going to be honest. I expected nothing, nothing at all when I headed into this. Gotta say that I got pleasantly surprised. The author managed to avoid the trap where the characters get their personalities warped to fit the story. Surprisingly, they all mostly stay true to their own character. I like the small interactions our mc has with the side characters (especially the Ino-Shika-Cho trio and Gai). It's the little things that matter. Hopefully we'll keep this pace through the novel. A lot of fanfic writers get impatient when there's a lack of action and try to rush things. Good job! Keep up the good work!

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I had too much expectations at the beginning then there was all those nerfing and shit. When I calmed down and lowered my expectations, I enjoyed it. Plus Ino is my preferred girl between Sakura, Hinata,... But I liked her behavior so her slight OOC moments are horrible for me. Also, I think I will hate MC soon enough. For now, I can recommend it.

I don't really give reviews to ffs so this is new to me but here we go. I have read till chap 6 and I think that should be enough to get interested in a ff or a story really but I am not getting any good vibe from this so I have given it 3 stars in writing quality it would have been higher if he didn't make those petty mistakes in the beginning and ****ed up powerscaling was written better and the MC wasn't nerfed... the story dev got 2 cause cause well the story isn't original and he didn't really change anything that much the story didn't change that much even though there is a new character involved in the plot... character design is 1 cause well you get the point and the oc didn't have a design that stands out... world back ground is 2 cause it might get better there is potential... update stability has not been seen here since the day of dawn... p.s: I didn't hate it but it is too generic and I think it will be a waste of time if I read anymore Soo bye...thanks for an alright read.

very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others

It's alright so far. I thought it would be generic at first because of the whole guy meets being that gives you wishes trope, but I was surprised that I enjoyed it. A few errors here and there but all around readable, hopefully the quality doesn't drop.