kiritonaruto

bro if you are going to marry him to someone make him marry someone like dacey mormont.

great story and potential just believe in your self and please don't abandon the story aurthor

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great art work and all but you made him too strong in the beginning only there is not mush growth rather than making him OP like this you could have made his wishes his potential make him workhard to get stronger like maybe essence of blank etc which would have given him potential rather than power sice you have idea of those huge beast things you should have put the time-line when magic was in it's peak like when age of heroes or period when Valyrians and ryonish were in their peak and may be made him an stark so he would have legitimate right to rule north also rather then making him some crazy men world domination idea you could make him an adventurous spirit wanting to explore the world first then other universes and multiverse him building an great empire or become world reader should be his side affect of his adventures and great on characters but not too many women or it will ruin the already ruined world.

don't make the jason and Hermione pairing do something maybe susan bones or Daphne greengrass etc or even OC, everything seems to be great but just feeling you are lagging the story these days may be quicken up the pace or deep dive into it

man forged from fire and trails of tragedy

not towers man mountains

bro just great bro never saw this crossover in the fanfiction completely new please do not abandon them man I am dying for next chapters.

you are doing nothing but disrespecting santana religion fuck you