Item: “Obsessed”
Rating: 5
Author: hellokkkk

hellokkkkLv14yr

2020-10-27 12:59

I really like the characters and plot, the book has potential, I recommend the author to make the paragraphs into small sentences as readers are often lazy to read long paragraphs

“Obsessed”

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