Item: “Obsessed”
Rating: 4.6
Author: MissReeed

MissReeedLv114yr

2020-10-26 21:50

I love ittt. Mix of BL and thriller got me immediately adding this to my collection. Those texts in parentheses, you can put it in the author's note so it won't interrupt the reading. Spaces after commas, proper punctuations are needed. Also, not too much capslock, instead, just use (!). Wall of text should be cut, too long of a paragraph. Just need some more edits. Setting that aside, I really like the plot. Been reading too much sweet BL and I need a change 😆 This book is perfect for what I am looking for. Very nice but the cliffhanger tho :< Still 4 chapters and I am looking forward for more! 💖

“Obsessed”

bjalex

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bjalexAuthor

A hahha thanks:) I make sure to put the warning before every chapter do readers don't forget what the book is about:)

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