Item: “Obsessed”
Rating: 5
Author: MITCHIEWilliams

MITCHIEWilliamsLv44yr

2020-10-27 00:39

This is a really good read. I like the characters, they're well ddeveloped.I love the writing style. I like the mixture of boys love and mystery. This book has a lot of potential. Keep it up Author.

“Obsessed”

bjalex

4.7

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Liked by 3 people

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bjalexAuthor

Thanks for the review!

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