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NewGoldie
NewGoldieLv144yr
2020-10-31 10:50

if you make your MC strong why did you even put him to a weak verse just to neft him to they're level when you can just put him to a stronger verses. like a Nerf Jin Mori is a multi continental level a super nerf Jin Mori is large building level. so really he just stronger in weak verses. either you start him weak to strong or just stay true to his power no retarded nerf even in a weak verse is kinda ruining the story.

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Sky_Demon_Order
Sky_Demon_OrderLv14

Hey its about battling one of the best fanfoc i read that arent a FUCKING SHITING TRASHY HAREM WITH STUPID EMOTIENS

Mariza_Brondial
Mariza_BrondialLv1

miami.ks

Mariza_Brondial
Mariza_BrondialLv1

nenns.

ShoShoShoSho
ShoShoShoShoLv3

good speak. unga bunga cave man noise

Sky_Demon_Order:Hey its about battling one of the best fanfoc i read that arent a FUCKING SHITING TRASHY HAREM WITH STUPID EMOTIENS
TheGodSage
TheGodSageLv13

ShoShoShoSho:good speak. unga bunga cave man noise
Pyoug
PyougLv4

did you just say jin mori is large building level? read the fuking manhwa god damn bruh...

NewGoldie
NewGoldieLv14

yeah in early chapter.

Pyoug:did you just say jin mori is large building level? read the fuking manhwa god damn bruh...
NewGoldie
NewGoldieLv14

I know his a universal to multiversal level in the later chapters.

Pyoug:did you just say jin mori is large building level? read the fuking manhwa god damn bruh...
NewGoldie
NewGoldieLv14

I'm comparing the original Jin mori to this fanfic Jin Mori in early chapters.

Pyoug:did you just say jin mori is large building level? read the fuking manhwa god damn bruh...
Pyoug
PyougLv4

nice and yeah I agree, before timeskip he could be scaled to uni with 1 scan and multiversal after timeskip due to all the power ups and the new techniques

NewGoldie:I'm comparing the original Jin mori to this fanfic Jin Mori in early chapters.
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amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4

A heads up.......... C1- MC asks for jin moris abilities, saitamas strength [ saitamas strength, yes...strength ] and full control of abilities-----> Alright, for my 1st wish i would like to have mastery over Jin Mori's Renewal Taekwondo techniques and skills, for my 2nd wish, i would like to have Saitama's strength, for my 3rd wish, i would like to have full control of my power as i don't want to end a fight with one punch, because i still want to enjoy a fight... and lastly for my 4th wish i would like to travel to different worlds at will", Michael stated quickly as he felt he wouldn't have a-lot of time. --------- this is retarded cause later he says-----> Michael:" Because i've always liked the story and felt it was good...except that i feel the quirk-less are under-appreciated and almost criticised for being weak when it's all based on genetics. And that's why i need you to do me a favour.... can you make me quirk-less", Michael stated with a smile on his face, and his bloodlust and excitement rising in unison. ---------- the entire point is that MC should be powerless and he uses his own strength to win, but the MC already has hax abilities. so the entire point is lost, and fact that he states he wants prove being quirkless are strong is retarded when he has more power than half the anime characters out there -- not a review but a heads up. [ a little bit of logic is always needed for a bk, retarded shit like this just removes any interest to continue reading the bk] once again, just a heads up, rating means jackshit

topak
topakLv14
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