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Jasonenrick
JasonenrickLv144yr
2020-10-31 05:50

Writing Quality 4-Stars Story Development 1-Star Character Design 2-Stars Updating Stablity 4-Stars World Background 3-Stars Well, I would delete the First 6 chapters and Re-do them

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Jasonenrick
JasonenrickLv14

(An: Good fighting scenes but the Author nerfes the Mc and all his powers to such an extand that I question myself why the First 6 chapters even exist )

crimsonitaci
crimsonitaciLv12

no pls nerf is for longer ch :'l

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amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4

A heads up.......... C1- MC asks for jin moris abilities, saitamas strength [ saitamas strength, yes...strength ] and full control of abilities-----> Alright, for my 1st wish i would like to have mastery over Jin Mori's Renewal Taekwondo techniques and skills, for my 2nd wish, i would like to have Saitama's strength, for my 3rd wish, i would like to have full control of my power as i don't want to end a fight with one punch, because i still want to enjoy a fight... and lastly for my 4th wish i would like to travel to different worlds at will", Michael stated quickly as he felt he wouldn't have a-lot of time. --------- this is retarded cause later he says-----> Michael:" Because i've always liked the story and felt it was good...except that i feel the quirk-less are under-appreciated and almost criticised for being weak when it's all based on genetics. And that's why i need you to do me a favour.... can you make me quirk-less", Michael stated with a smile on his face, and his bloodlust and excitement rising in unison. ---------- the entire point is that MC should be powerless and he uses his own strength to win, but the MC already has hax abilities. so the entire point is lost, and fact that he states he wants prove being quirkless are strong is retarded when he has more power than half the anime characters out there -- not a review but a heads up. [ a little bit of logic is always needed for a bk, retarded shit like this just removes any interest to continue reading the bk] once again, just a heads up, rating means jackshit

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