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amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv44yr
2020-10-24 01:36

A heads up.......... C1- MC asks for jin moris abilities, saitamas strength [ saitamas strength, yes...strength ] and full control of abilities-----> Alright, for my 1st wish i would like to have mastery over Jin Mori's Renewal Taekwondo techniques and skills, for my 2nd wish, i would like to have Saitama's strength, for my 3rd wish, i would like to have full control of my power as i don't want to end a fight with one punch, because i still want to enjoy a fight... and lastly for my 4th wish i would like to travel to different worlds at will", Michael stated quickly as he felt he wouldn't have a-lot of time. --------- this is retarded cause later he says-----> Michael:" Because i've always liked the story and felt it was good...except that i feel the quirk-less are under-appreciated and almost criticised for being weak when it's all based on genetics. And that's why i need you to do me a favour.... can you make me quirk-less", Michael stated with a smile on his face, and his bloodlust and excitement rising in unison. ---------- the entire point is that MC should be powerless and he uses his own strength to win, but the MC already has hax abilities. so the entire point is lost, and fact that he states he wants prove being quirkless are strong is retarded when he has more power than half the anime characters out there -- not a review but a heads up. [ a little bit of logic is always needed for a bk, retarded shit like this just removes any interest to continue reading the bk] once again, just a heads up, rating means jackshit

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PoorKarma
PoorKarmaAuthor

thanks for your advice

amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4

really just saying. remove MC's hypocritical and pointless statement [ just suggestion, nothing more]

PoorKarma:thanks for your advice
PoorKarma
PoorKarmaAuthor

thats why he lost saitamas strength when yami took it away and got immeasurable phyiscal prowess because he wanted to gain the power himself but thanks for telling me this

amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4

its cool,...also forgot about that. the neutering. u neutered him and yet u still gave him a hax power. its redundant. should've just make him weak to strong instead of giving hax wish, neutering him but at the same time still giving him hax power, its pointless

PoorKarma:thats why he lost saitamas strength when yami took it away and got immeasurable phyiscal prowess because he wanted to gain the power himself but thanks for telling me this
PoorKarma
PoorKarmaAuthor

damn that analogy worked perfect ....

amaturewriter:its cool,...also forgot about that. the neutering. u neutered him and yet u still gave him a hax power. its redundant. should've just make him weak to strong instead of giving hax wish, neutering him but at the same time still giving him hax power, its pointless
Silent_Moon
Silent_MoonLv12

Wait, what? He lost it?

PoorKarma:thats why he lost saitamas strength when yami took it away and got immeasurable phyiscal prowess because he wanted to gain the power himself but thanks for telling me this
Shadewind
ShadewindLv6

I hate nerfing thanks for heads up appreciate it.

amaturewriter:its cool,...also forgot about that. the neutering. u neutered him and yet u still gave him a hax power. its redundant. should've just make him weak to strong instead of giving hax wish, neutering him but at the same time still giving him hax power, its pointless
PERUSH
PERUSHLv2

Need some work

PoorKarma
PoorKarmaAuthor

he isn't nerfed, beginning is changed

amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4

its the same............... Michael:" Because I've always liked the story and felt it was good...except that i feel the quirk-less are under-appreciated and almost criticised for being weak when it's all based on genetics. And that's why i need you to do me a favour.... can you make me quirk-less", Michael stated with a smile on his face, and his bloodlust and excitement rising in unison.

PoorKarma:he isn't nerfed, beginning is changed
Silent_Moon
Silent_MoonLv12

He lost it? Does that mean he wasted a wish or did he get a new one?

PoorKarma:thats why he lost saitamas strength when yami took it away and got immeasurable phyiscal prowess because he wanted to gain the power himself but thanks for telling me this
Jitna
JitnaLv5

i was about to say it would be smart since his abilities wont be quirks and cant be taken or copied but then author said that some yami guy took it

Juhiko
JuhikoLv6

so nerf him not for me

Thanks_The
Thanks_TheLv4

Same here

Juhiko:so nerf him not for me
The_Duke_of_Wisdom
The_Duke_of_WisdomLv3

Dude that is straight up incorrect he asks for a high physical limit and Jim movies skill as well as mastery over size skills he has to train multiple times

amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4

Look at the date of the review, look at the authors comments

The_Duke_of_Wisdom:Dude that is straight up incorrect he asks for a high physical limit and Jim movies skill as well as mastery over size skills he has to train multiple times
pinto
pintoLv1

but he wasnt born with that strength. Yes he asked for jins abilities but all he asked was to remove the limiter on his body so he can continue to grow through each fight and workout sesh, so that means he got strong through his own efforts, because he was working out and practicing his taekwondo non stop for like 15 years

SungJinMori
SungJinMoriLv4

Duse at least put spoiler

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