I feel like some parts could be written better. I think the cover will probably not draw in as much readers. Overall, it's a good novel, looking forward to more!
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LIKEPrince_nonchalant:Thanks for the review! I'm doing my best to edit everything. I try to look over my writing to see the mistakes I made, plus what others show me. I'll also try to find a cover change soon too if it's not all that great.