Review Detail of M1XALI0 in The Second Demon
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a five stars for you author-san. i just hope the MC acts like an wise person because of his age and this book doesn't turn into a shitty harem story. also a way to be unique and differ from other fan fics is for the MC to use a spear. hope this helps
The Second Demon
TediousHamster
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another cool thing would be to have some kind of blood art where he uses his body vitality for a temporary boost but it damages his body or smt
TediousHamster:don't worry it won't be a harem, he's smart but does stupid things from time to time, a spear? that seems like a great idea....hmm maybe...just wait for future chapters i guess
M1XALI0:another cool thing would be to have some kind of blood art where he uses his body vitality for a temporary boost but it damages his body or smt
I'll agree that the mc is a bit childish and immature for now and will change as more and more chapters get posted, I don't see how he is boring. can you elaborate ?
Chaosreigns:I find him to be boring in personality
TediousHamster:don't worry it won't be a harem, he's smart but does stupid things from time to time, a spear? that seems like a great idea....hmm maybe...just wait for future chapters i guess
so despite being a demon he'll be a demon slayer…? Not for me then since all fanfics of this series have slayer mc
TediousHamster:don't worry it won't be a harem, he's smart but does stupid things from time to time, a spear? that seems like a great idea....hmm maybe...just wait for future chapters i guess
Traps_Are_Gay:so despite being a demon he'll be a demon slayer…? Not for me then since all fanfics of this series have slayer mc
TediousHamster:don't worry it won't be a harem, he's smart but does stupid things from time to time, a spear? that seems like a great idea....hmm maybe...just wait for future chapters i guess
TediousHamster:don't worry it won't be a harem, he's smart but does stupid things from time to time, a spear? that seems like a great idea....hmm maybe...just wait for future chapters i guess
He'll be in between, a grey area but I'm thinking of making him go through an 'evil' phase or something for a brief period
JSKOPOP:He wont be a good guy right ? But will go against slayers?