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Zaysay
ZaysayAuthor4yr
2021-01-08 23:40

Hello guys, this is the author. Another shameless review, hahaha. There really ain't much to say, but I'll tell you what to expect in the early stage of the story. Right now, the released chapters (55 chapters) could be considered early stage because of its slow start. So, read if you vibing with that. The mc, Desire, is a baby that grows old in time. He is weak, and naive. However, that will change as he grows older. By the way, on the early stage of the story, the MC is a fool/simp for monsters. (Yes, until now.) And he hates humans. So, after meeting a character in the story, he tries to 'fix' that problem quite literally. The MC will go on an adventure where he would then meet many people. The plot of the story...Now, that's for you to read. I hope to see you guys in the latest chapter!

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KFCmicchicken
KFCmicchickenLv15

I really look forward to see where u take this story and wish the best of luck.... it looks good so far.

Ancient_Egyptian
Ancient_EgyptianLv13

The strangeness of the first few chapters can't be more irritating...and it's exactly like what Mr.author said in his review.

Unsoph
UnsophLv11

Keep the work up man. Doing a good job and story is the best

God_Of_Lazinesss
God_Of_LazinesssLv2

Don't why you think it's bad to simp on monsters, it would have been bad if he simp useless girls

BroBeforeHoe
BroBeforeHoeLv13

is there R-18/Lemon/Smut Scene already ? cause there's no marker for R-18/Lemon/Smut Scene on chapter title

Weezyf
WeezyfLv3

Uh will he become a demon or not ?? I only came here because of demon title but your telling me this “demon” be simping and trying to love humans?

holson_Charles
holson_CharlesLv15

Yeah this is why i came here for, a demon.

Weezyf:Uh will he become a demon or not ?? I only came here because of demon title but your telling me this “demon” be simping and trying to love humans?
Edwin_Snowman
Edwin_SnowmanLv12

It's lovely author ..... Am with you through the way author ..... Just bring out more chapters. You're doing a greate Job Author you have my full support. I just addicted to the Novel so can't wait for the other chapters ...!

Lianlaris
LianlarisLv14

I hope to see the latest chapters so i can read the plot. are you going to finish the story?

yb48
yb48Lv14

Will the author finish this novel?

Sinful_Cyanide
Sinful_CyanideLv15

Does he ever stop simping for them?

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