Review Detail of Jo_J in What?! The gamemaster and the top player are dating?! [BL]

To be honest... BT and fantasy is not "my cup of coffe", but... I like the way you write abot the gaming. It is very illustrative. The storyline is interesting and keeps the readers attention. That's what writing novels are about - keeping readers attention to the end :) so you're doing very well. Wish you inspiration and a lot of good ideas!