The concept can be called original. The novel can be called good. It would be good for the author to improve himself over time by writing. It would be nice to be more descriptive in some places. mc needs to show his true self, he is someone who does everything for power, but in some places he is ridiculous, mc needs to be someone who does everything for his interests. in some places he contradicts himself.
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