this is the author's friend, and I got to say this is the best thing I have seen in my life. It's like gold. and if you are thinking I'm the author then here I will give the phone to the author. this is the author and he was not lying, that was not me acting like someone else. and if you don't believe me I will give the phone to a friend. this is the friend, they are not lying. I was watching them...

The writing quality is bad. In most sentences there are some random words that make absolutely no sense being there.

the whole thing is a mess. It feels like that the writer himself is not clear about his own Power system /cultivation system. The sentences don't make sense at all.

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The concept can be called original. The novel can be called good. It would be good for the author to improve himself over time by writing. It would be nice to be more descriptive in some places. mc needs to show his true self, he is someone who does everything for power, but in some places he is ridiculous, mc needs to be someone who does everything for his interests. in some places he contradicts himself.

Love the whole novel, all the chapters are large and the concept and development is great, basically the mc had a system that allow him to go outside his own universe(the cultivation universe) and conquer other worlds, people and fuse everything that its there to keep expanding and evolving their world, while he do this he keeps following the plot that is good because there is always more in store to motivate mc to cultivate. But what i like the most is the cultivation system, the cultivation system and the things cultivators can do in sora's world is really crazy and is even stronger than other cultivation novels, but even like that is not boring to read the novel, the powerscale is really well balanced and all the diferent enemies's powers levels in other worlds are measured using the same cultivation system so its not confusing. really you shoud give it a try, there is always something new to make the novel more and more interesting.

t would have been a masterpiece if you add red in the harem wuahahahahshahahah I mean it would be the most logical reason, it just need a bit more emotion

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Everything looks alright to me except for some misspellings, .