Bright_Betha

i was also wondering the same thing aaah,

and stop adding time it's just making it sound dumb after saying it's chaos and time does not exist, unless he has a way

why is the author trying to add unnecessary words to this Wonderful story if not too exaggerated

not hating just expressing since we are the ones reading it if not we wouldn't care but it was posted and needs comments even if they might be negative ones but still comments next time should improve

dude needed to skip romance, why force it just to destroy the novel, aaaaaaah

man thought you said he is strong with chaos heart and chaos something and also he is a divine monarch why are you making him afraid of the overlord with the same level? Do you know what it means overpowered?

first of this is a great novel, you have made this novel interesting but too much future information is making the novel hard to read after knowing where he will end up with his powers, if it's like that how about making it short and not too long but interesting in every chapter so one reads it repeatedly and be satisfied rather make more chapters and bore the reader, but all in all this is a great novel i love the different system of power it's refreshing seeing and reading something new unlike all these other repetitive novels, don't drop it keep it up 👍🔥you deserve all the stars but it's to motivate you 😂

same issue oof grammar why is he not getting at least help on that aaaah good ideas but he sucks on the grammar and gives up too

the novel that is, it's lit

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