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2023-04-13 13:29

Great grammar and decent story. however, the MC is such a distorted version of Tony, one even death and time wouldn't create. He believes himself the ultimate victim, while throwing shade at himself slightly to try and not be obvious. kinda emo. Such a depressing outlook on everyone and everything in the beginning. I know its to create a version of Tony to fit your story but its just all a bit much and and a bit farfetched. this is definitely not the MCU but could be a different universe that is very similar because this Tony ain't the one we know. Give the story a try before moving on. A serious Tony is a boring Tony.

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