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Lackada1sical
Lackada1sicalLv41yr
2023-01-16 00:50

Initial Evaluation: Average at best. Less to no mistake grammatical errors, well thought chapters wherein dealing with the what ifs, however, it's a misrepresentation of THE TONY STARK. this is more on an emotional side of author-san when it comes to marvel Tony stark. I highly recommend reading comics pertaining to Tony stark back in time so you can correctly portray Tony stark. You are kinda devaluing him in this FF which is a bummer.

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KasiCair
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Eh, I guess I can't really argue about that. I didn't really focus on making Tony Stark as close to the original as possible when writing this. I could give you some half-hearted excuse that experiencing death would change anybody but... meh. I take your critique. It is a valid point and if that's what you don't like about my story, then that's completely fine. As for reading the original comics... ugh. Yeaaah, that's not for me. I don't like comics. My only experience with Marvel Universe is from the movies.

Konrad_The_Fourth
Konrad_The_FourthLv4

Is your tony stark interacted with vanko?

KasiCair:Eh, I guess I can't really argue about that. I didn't really focus on making Tony Stark as close to the original as possible when writing this. I could give you some half-hearted excuse that experiencing death would change anybody but... meh. I take your critique. It is a valid point and if that's what you don't like about my story, then that's completely fine. As for reading the original comics... ugh. Yeaaah, that's not for me. I don't like comics. My only experience with Marvel Universe is from the movies.
Mahfuz_Aknda
Mahfuz_AkndaLv4

R8

KasiCair:Eh, I guess I can't really argue about that. I didn't really focus on making Tony Stark as close to the original as possible when writing this. I could give you some half-hearted excuse that experiencing death would change anybody but... meh. I take your critique. It is a valid point and if that's what you don't like about my story, then that's completely fine. As for reading the original comics... ugh. Yeaaah, that's not for me. I don't like comics. My only experience with Marvel Universe is from the movies.
Nicholas_Sette
Nicholas_SetteLv3

has this been droped

KasiCair:Eh, I guess I can't really argue about that. I didn't really focus on making Tony Stark as close to the original as possible when writing this. I could give you some half-hearted excuse that experiencing death would change anybody but... meh. I take your critique. It is a valid point and if that's what you don't like about my story, then that's completely fine. As for reading the original comics... ugh. Yeaaah, that's not for me. I don't like comics. My only experience with Marvel Universe is from the movies.
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