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Aeternabilis
AeternabilisLv143yr
2021-03-09 03:05

Not that great of a story. It is basically exactly the same legend of Korra story with the mc being a side character. I don't know about you but who tf reads a story of a side character that effects nothing? So yeah it is a waste of time. Don't bother wasting your time tbh

The Mechanic and the Earthbender

staycool1214
3.9
38 Chs

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DetachedDreamer
DetachedDreamerLv14

so true.

3yr
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Bob_Joe
Bob_JoeLv11

A rehash of the original story with all of the same **** drama and stilted dialogue. Despite the introduction of the new OC, the story frustratingly stays the exact same, with the OC serving as an annoying hype man to Korra. When viewed in light of LoK, this is an alright fanfic with the world development on point. However, when compared to the punchy and mature character development from ATLA, this is rather lacking.

4yr

DetachedDreamer
DetachedDreamerLv14

everything is copied and the same from the story except tiny tweaks that have no relevance to the story. the MC is overpowered yet unable to change one event in the timeline. possibly the worst attempt at a story. ever.

3yr
ExiledLord
ExiledLordLv15

The story of a mob character/ sidekick. The world is obviously great, but the addition of this oc changes literally nothing...If you want a rehash of the plot with a focus on a Oc who is supposedly powerful while simultaneously being astonishingly useless in just about every angle, thus is the story for you. The story is going through an rewrite right now, though atleast at this time, it seems to be more of the same, will update if anything does

3yr
OhhhhNooo
OhhhhNoooLv10

So what is this? I noticed u have two of the same story with some differences. I can tell u put time and effort in this so I’m assuming it has a purpose.

4yr
Alexandre_M
Alexandre_MLv1

I like both versions of your story, but I can't deny it, this is my favorite. The construction of the novel is much better constructed. You improved on some small details about Mc's relationship with Hiroshi Sato, which is good, because, honestly, there were some inconsistencies in the other story. The plot has more coherence in this than in the other. And as for the love relationship, I hope Kota has a relationship with Asami this time, instead of Korra. Regardless of your choice, it will look good anyway, but don't be discouraged in writing.

4yr
Isaiah_Warner
Isaiah_WarnerLv4

i just added a power stone. can you please update?

1yr
Isaiah_Warner
Isaiah_WarnerLv4

I really liked this story when it came out, i Found it again. ru still alive? can you continue it?

1yr
Luiz_David_6945
Luiz_David_6945Lv10

Well, this is not really a criticism of the story, but a question, what happened to the version of FanFiction autor? . .. . ............................................................

3yr
Armoti_Nelson
Armoti_NelsonLv2

Love the story im asking if this love like real love or he has both have korra and the Other girl is what or loving one is cool and no im not from the harem-sect im asking because a lot of story Have build up of love just to tell one girl “your a great friend” when knowing the Other girl feelings just ask strongly it breaks my lil heart when theres all these feels from mord then one girl that ends up with nothing in return im not a catch them all guy but keeping everyone but the love intrest at the friend Ship level usually works out the best btw I LOVE THE STORY !! Thanks author-sama

4yr
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