The world while not unique is fun and the first chapter sets up a unique twist to the returner genre but it is a shame that the author’s inexperience shows a lot in this story. In essence its badly written with a combination of cringe lines and strange and forced logic. a rewrite in 5 years time would be a great read once the author grows and improves
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