this story is a solo leveling type story but very downgraded. grammar is rough. the main character doesn't really seem as an mc because of the lack of actual content surrounding him. The story speaks of random hunters and soldier 97% of the time and the other 3% is the mc talking about his guilt for his fathers death. the story is very slow paced but not interesting enough to be like that.
Phantomfiend
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LIKEHis complaint here is that it's paced out poorly and not very engaging, please don't make his critique sound irrelevant by bringing up things that don't affect the problem.
Phantomfiend:It's okay, since its early story. Can't talk much about MC then end the story prematurely on 50 chapter. Other character need their on story too.