Item: In the clutches of the dark prince
Rating: 4.8
Author: fantasybliss30

fantasybliss30Lv123yr

2021-04-03 04:55

A really cool and fun read. If you want some royal escapism, this is it. 1. Writing quality: The writing quality is actually pretty good, although there are a few grammatical and typographical errors, But they do not take away from the meaning of the sentence. 2. Stability of Updates: Regular 3. Story Development: Really good. Develops pretty quickly and the conflict is established early on. Pacing is awesome too, and you can see the clear direction it is going towards. 4. Character Design: The characters are already very likeable and their motivations are very clear. But, this is also an area that has some room improvement, especially regarding decision making by the characters and the reactions to their surroundings. I have shared detailed suggestions in individual chapters. 5. World Background: Awesome!! You see all the key players right away. There is some room for greater fleshing out of the surroundings but it can always be done in a second edit and does not take away from the story. Thank you very much, dear author, for the great work!

In the clutches of the dark prince

Mystic_Dragon_

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Mystic_Dragon_Author

Thank you, I'm glad that you liked it.

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