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AoiShana8
AoiShana8Lv103yr
2021-02-03 00:11

Like this story! The plot is interesting and make me want to know more and more 💕 I'm still in the beginning but I have fallen in love with this story and the characters. If I can give you some feedback, maybe in the writing aspects. Sometimes you made mistake at arranging the sentences so I encourage you to read and learn more in this aspect. But because I'm still in the beginning of the chapters, I don't know if you've been better at this at the latest chapter (I hope so and very happy for that! 😘) Good job author! 💕💕💕💕

In the clutches of the dark prince

Mystic_Dragon_
4.8
61 Chs

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Mystic_Dragon_
Mystic_Dragon_Author

Thank you for the correction. I'm glad that you liked the book.

3yr
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AoiShana8
AoiShana8Lv10

U're welcome 🥰

Mystic_Dragon_:Thank you for the correction. I'm glad that you liked the book.
3yr
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mozza_mello
mozza_melloLv3

Woah that was a good read :D Alright, let's start, first off, the beginning was great. It had a powerful hook and enough mystery to keep me wanting to read more and find out what happened and what will unfold. So good job, author! :D The characters are lovable, and their interactions are very cute and it felt genuine, hehe! I love how each character has their own quirks, making them distinguishable, which is a plus, yay! The only thing that could use some work is the punctuation, I guess? It's a bit distracting, but this is still a great book that's smooth to read :D Great work, author! Cheering for you! <3

3yr

AmateurAuthor
AmateurAuthorLv10

This is a really nice novel! Based on reading just the first few chapters, I can feel already that the plot has a high potential. The character design is very good. Each of them has a unique history and personality. The choice of title and cover is also interesting. It is actually the thing that drew me to give a review of this novel. I am getting intrigued while reading and can't wait for the next update. Definitely, adding it to my collection. Good job, author!

3yr
Tim_B_Suana_18
Tim_B_Suana_18Lv3

I'm shocked with how you can hook me with just a few chapters. I have to say, you did pretty well on trying to give the readers a sense of mystery. The characters are well-designed. Plus, you did a good job on making their own unique way of speech.

3yr
_JN_
_JN_Lv3

Mel is just who has no control over her mouth😘.... Mr.T / Brenton / Leon , u r not evil she will like u despite of ur past scars🥺..... I really like grandpa Rick for being such a caring , loving person 😍😍

3yr
Jigx
JigxLv3

I'd like how you utilize your words to express an explosive thoughts, Good job, Author! Aside from that, it's well written not too fast and not slow. Keep up the good work! Your book is a master piece.

3yr
Martin_T3
Martin_T3Lv2

A delightful read, I must say. Filled with excellent worldbuilding and enjoyable characters. The author does a fantastic job with the writing and making sure it's on point. Kudos, and keep doing a good work.

3yr
Arvero
ArveroLv2

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ILLYAchan
ILLYAchanLv5

I love your story! I'm still in chapter 9 and I will continue to read more as this story is very interesting. The characters are dynamic and the one that makes this story thrilling aside from its world-building. Though I'm more curious about the male lead😆 As the author said, some grammar needs fixing but it didn't take away my good reading experience. I really like this one! Keep it up author!:)

3yr
Pinkyprincess
PinkyprincessLv13

OMG, I never thought I'd be attracted toward a contemporary romance! they're always so cliche with a similar concept. But the first chaoter hooked me successfully! Keep updating!

3yr
Madyan_wani
Madyan_waniLv10

Omg what a plot! Amazing .I love mystic persons .The background and characters chitchatting and chemistry sounds good. The cover is so nice it really hooked me down. Great effort writer.

3yr
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