Woah that was a good read :D Alright, let's start, first off, the beginning was great. It had a powerful hook and enough mystery to keep me wanting to read more and find out what happened and what will unfold. So good job, author! :D The characters are lovable, and their interactions are very cute and it felt genuine, hehe! I love how each character has their own quirks, making them distinguishable, which is a plus, yay! The only thing that could use some work is the punctuation, I guess? It's a bit distracting, but this is still a great book that's smooth to read :D Great work, author! Cheering for you! <3
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