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Brontoseno
BrontosenoLv43yr
2021-10-15 03:29

it goes downhill FOR ME when he can control everything in his "domain". FOR ME, it will be good if the mc not OP from the begining. but gradualy become powerfull and powerfull. so we can se the progress of the story and character in their daily activity. i know that it is fanfiction story. but it will be good if the story can make the reader become exited from the progres of story. thats from me!

Mha: Aegis the Shield Hero

Asce
4.6
80 Chs

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Ashmodai
AshmodaiLv4

Not a very enjoyable Story. Grammar is good. 4/5 Story Development 2/5 it's at the moment just Canon with an added MC. Character Development 2/5 The MC is basically an Emo that mentally complains about everything be it all Mighty or exercises or talking with other people. There is no real development at the moment but its not enjoyable to read with such an MC. Update Stability 4/5 World background 3/5 since it's only canon there is nothing much to rate. So all in all an okay work but nothing special and the MCs personality makes it rather difficult to enjoy.

3yr

Asce
AsceAuthor

New fanfic which means I must follow tradition give myself a shameless 5 star review. Either way, I hope you enjoy this new fanfic. Have a nice day.

3yr
Triston_Nomach
Triston_NomachLv3

Have you seen Aegis of Fairy Tail, it is a fanfic, where mc can use barrier make, he later becomes an S rank wizards and later the ace of fairy tail and a Wizard Saint. . It is a great story, it will help you in this story, in developing his character and skills. Looking forward to this story...

3yr
Zenithlr
ZenithlrLv4

8 chapters in. So far so good. I got immersed in the story quickly. I love his personality. Smart and the best thing is that he doesn't care about some things at all. It is very different from every other fanfic. It is unique because the MC did not meet with Midoriya before coming to UA. The MC doesn't really hang out with Midoriya. Please don't drop this Fanfic.

3yr
SVCERVANTES
SVCERVANTESLv1

Very good story, I can only ask you to appear a romance, I was going to ask you to choose a fem! todoroki but I don't think it's possible anymore ...

3yr
EspersLv6
EspersLv6Lv3

Good story. The story is good until MC completely changes behavior at random (the reason is written, but the change is too big to accept). But this happens towards the end, a bad saga (the final saga) is not enough to make a story bad, since he has always entertained me. Let's say that i noticed the desire to finish everything quickly, when you could slowly change the behavior of the protagonist. Another negative thing is the "skills" that are created (always at random) from his Quirk.

3yr
DRAGONSLAYER
DRAGONSLAYERLv4

There are many MHA fanfic novels which are good and bad but this one falls under "Very good" catogory Great work done by the author 'Asce' Definitely recommended to read. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

3yr
MakimaChan
MakimaChanLv11

Well its not the typical cold or brash mc, but just plain ol good minimal talk and friends kind of mc, a good use of power and a great one too, looking forward for future chapter ,I hope romance wouldn't ruin it tho, it would be great if there is some romantic interaction between character and mc.

3yr
happy_sad
happy_sadLv13

It went so well untill you awakened his quirk forced plot and SPOILER GO TO NEXT WORD IF YOU DONT WANT TO KNOW he doesn't revive his mother and forces people to die because plot he already revived nine before so he could do it again The grammar is decent there are a couple mistakes every paragraph (around)

3yr
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