Brontoseno

it will be interesting if the MC is an ugly person

good story. I hope you can continue this story and not stop suddenly. just a suggestion, I hope this story's pace doesn't move too fast, and you don't get too many pokemon at the start of the adventure. too many pokemon and too many high level pokemons at the start will result in the story being bland and boring. provide more strugle and challenges so that this story becomes unpredictable and exicting

why it feels like i read chinese novel character?

please dontnot the harem lord

before that i like to say congrats for you degree. i happy that you still want to come back to write stories.

ah here they are how long it is? and i think you abandon us

pure soul mean the soul of future pervert and harem king

it is a good story with good gramar. i know it is a harem story, but i have same problem with almost all the harem story. the MC forget about the other harem member. too much harem member can destroy the story.

true but the story don't need to follow exactly like the gamer. with a little modification the story can become greater