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Just_Rache
Just_RacheLv14yr
2020-10-19 18:33

This is an amazing book! The synopsos really suits the book! I relly like how you developed the characters in the first few chapters! There are things that you could potentially improve but other than that I think your book is great!

Journey into the Dark Universe

nyype
4.8
227 Chs

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nyype
nyypeAuthor

I am waiting your supports on my first book. I have many book ideas as well, However I will finish this long-winded project of mine. we have really likeable final. We have immersive story. Well, it consists of magic, cultivation, dao, science. Many of readers likes things from each other. how come all in one? well, I stayed by logic of course. Everything in this journey is answered. so there you go! Love you guys, Thanks for supports Hey, we have more than one MC, so female and male leads as well. dont get confused at the beginnig. I will not describe a lot the people whom is not important for story, because I DONT NEED FILLER CHAPTERS.. My story has huge concept enough. I will not explain the same things twice, but the novel will be long so if I did, just ignore and forgive me. Enjoy it!

4yr

Jae_Nika
Jae_NikaLv2

I really like this story a lot. Would definitely recommend if you like books like this one... The sypnosis is really nice and interesting and the overall work in a must read.

4yr
shaeshang
shaeshangLv2

The introductory of each character was perfect, first off. Secondly, details of the characters, place, and the description of what they did was on point. I was invested in the first three chapters and I extremely satisfy the way each character has their own light to be introduced. You manage to grab my attention now. To the library the book is. ☺😊😁

4yr
bibiyenini
bibiyeniniLv3

The synopsis has its impact alone! If you have to read something of science fiction and a fantasy combined genre and magical realism added ingredient in it, this book will suit you! Great job author!

4yr
Garo_
Garo_Lv5

Good Great Amazing Fantastic Fascinating Good Great Amazing Fantastic Fascinating Good Great Amazing Fantastic Fascinating Good Great Amazing Fantastic Fascinating

4yr
nyype
nyypeAuthor

Thanks for reviews and supports as this story got award the third place @ WPC 142

4yr
Lady_Djarin
Lady_DjarinLv2

I really loved the world building part and how the characters are introduced. Very engaging in terms of how the plot moves ahead. I am really enjoying this read. Best wishes to the author and keep going on your writing path!

4yr
pen_inker
pen_inkerLv2

Great read. The book is very detailed and interesting. Also I like the fact that there are more than one character that will be playing big in the story, so that I don't have to always see a name start each paragraph.

4yr
Editor1
Editor1Lv3

Well written and great narration! Please release more chapters

4yr
Jinfiction
JinfictionLv1

The Synopsis is really what caught my eye. The author has you yearning to know what happens to their lead. Of what I've read, the story is very descriptive, well-planned and easy to visualise! The author's commendable grammar alongside character development is to look out for! Must read!

4yr
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