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shaeshang
shaeshangLv24yr
2020-11-18 19:33

The introductory of each character was perfect, first off. Secondly, details of the characters, place, and the description of what they did was on point. I was invested in the first three chapters and I extremely satisfy the way each character has their own light to be introduced. You manage to grab my attention now. To the library the book is. ☺😊😁

Journey into the Dark Universe

nyype
4.8
227 Chs

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nyype
nyypeAuthor

I am glad you like it. Thank you. I am so motivated now!

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LastBookBender
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I think so. the characters were detailed very succesful. I like it.

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shaeshang
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Yup yup. So true

LastBookBender:I think so. the characters were detailed very succesful. I like it.
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nyype
nyypeAuthor

I am waiting your supports on my first book. I have many book ideas as well, However I will finish this long-winded project of mine. we have really likeable final. We have immersive story. Well, it consists of magic, cultivation, dao, science. Many of readers likes things from each other. how come all in one? well, I stayed by logic of course. Everything in this journey is answered. so there you go! Love you guys, Thanks for supports Hey, we have more than one MC, so female and male leads as well. dont get confused at the beginnig. I will not describe a lot the people whom is not important for story, because I DONT NEED FILLER CHAPTERS.. My story has huge concept enough. I will not explain the same things twice, but the novel will be long so if I did, just ignore and forgive me. Enjoy it!

4yr

Jae_Nika
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I really like this story a lot. Would definitely recommend if you like books like this one... The sypnosis is really nice and interesting and the overall work in a must read.

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bibiyenini
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The synopsis has its impact alone! If you have to read something of science fiction and a fantasy combined genre and magical realism added ingredient in it, this book will suit you! Great job author!

4yr
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nyype
nyypeAuthor

Thanks for reviews and supports as this story got award the third place @ WPC 142

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Lady_Djarin
Lady_DjarinLv2

I really loved the world building part and how the characters are introduced. Very engaging in terms of how the plot moves ahead. I am really enjoying this read. Best wishes to the author and keep going on your writing path!

4yr
pen_inker
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Great read. The book is very detailed and interesting. Also I like the fact that there are more than one character that will be playing big in the story, so that I don't have to always see a name start each paragraph.

4yr
Editor1
Editor1Lv3

Well written and great narration! Please release more chapters

4yr
Jinfiction
JinfictionLv1

The Synopsis is really what caught my eye. The author has you yearning to know what happens to their lead. Of what I've read, the story is very descriptive, well-planned and easy to visualise! The author's commendable grammar alongside character development is to look out for! Must read!

4yr
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