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CheatyTwo
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2024-10-18 13:40

A great piece of work!!! I fell in love with the main character. There is a certain mysterious charm and elegance of a higher demon in her behavior. The otherworldliness of her mind is also stunningly pronounced. I've read a lot of books about demons, but I've never seen such a realistic description of the behavior of a demon... Bravo!!!

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Houraji
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Thank you so much. So glad you're enjoying it so far, despite its snail's pace and the "wheneverly" update >< and to think there's still someone waiting for a chapter update with so much patience... in fact I can't thank you enough, But please, if there's something weighing on you about the story so far, you are welcome (no, but I demand you) to write any criticism, feedback, and or suggestion, regarding everything related to the story... I'll take all of it into consideration to write an enjoyable story for us all.

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Scyfer
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It's very rare to find a book that implements philosophical reference, these days. Right after I noticed the title of the first volume, I instantly knew if it was based on a work of René Descartes. He was such a great philosopher indeed. As the synopsis says, "The crimson thread will begin to roll... casting its shades of gray." My guess this story would not lead into your typical good guy vs bad guy. No. It would become more complex than that. "Moral Dilemmas" as the author first mentioned in the 21st chapter, and the more chapters will be brought to us, the more it became blur and obscure. The border between evil and virtue will become vague. The MC really fit into this belief. A demon girl who is somehow contradicting to her born-nature. An angelic demon, you could say. But the thing is... not that simple. She seemingly has a helpful, kind-hearted manner, not because she is a demon on the outside and an angel on the inside, but because she thinks... simple as that. Then again, all of it are related to René Descartes works. You'd better read this story firsthand to comprehend what I mean. It's really worth it. As I really love the plot, the written narrative and characters description - from what the characters are doing, body language, behavior, their way of think and et cetera - are perfectly served, especially how the author put his/her own thoughts in some chapters. The grammar however, yet I can understand since the author isn't the native english speaker - so am I - nothing to complain. Despite a few mistakes, the story is still easy to understand. Then last but not least, the author seems worried about the low upload rate compare to other. Here's my little note for you, the author, "Don't compare yourself with others. There's no comparison between the sun and the moon. They shine when when it's their time." In conclusion, keep writing at your own pace, do it at a speed that is comfortable for you. I don't mind waiting a week or so for a single chapter because I know it will going to be ripe. A good chapter and a great story take time after all.

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