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XylesiaLv24yr
2020-10-13 07:38

The starting of the story was quite shocking but in a good way. The author's writing style is good and easy on the eyes. I liked the descriptions of the scenes. The character design is good and the story flow is amazing. I'm eagerly waiting for the upcoming chapters. Thank you for your hard work!

Mr Indifferent CEO, Be Careful With My Heart

BaeVida
4.5
838 Chs

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BaeVida
BaeVidaAuthor

Thanks alot Xy. ..

4yr
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anudora17
anudora17Lv1

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4yr
Mmigre377
Mmigre377Lv2

Pretty good novel

4yr
ameliafenske
ameliafenskeLv11

nice

2yr
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Shiny_Star5683
Shiny_Star5683Lv13

I will full 5 ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ to this. I really love the book even though I wasn't sure about it in the beginning as the synopsis felt similar to other books where the fl saves the ml still I went forward and read it. Thank God I did cuz I really love the book. The plot in the beginning might be cliche for some but as it develops it's very amazing and fun to read. The FL is strong which is a plus point as I don't like weak ones. And ML till now is not that cold hearted to her as she helped him. As both had past lovers and relationships. It won't be easy to fall in love again. But I m willing to see how it happens. THANK U FIR THE BOOK 😍🥰

4yr

good_food_is_life
good_food_is_lifeLv4

It's an ace if you ask me. Author is such a sweet soul and each of her character has reflected the pure emotional changes and dilemma they got. So, the story is of a weak but strong girl li jing (ahem.. everyone's crush). why weak- because she was a pushover for jerk bf and trashy sis. strong- because she fought all the way tgou with lil tears but with a lot of will power and tremendous brain( als, i was such a genius). Ml if the story is ye cheng who's foolish but intelligent man. foolish - because he fall in trap easily and also, because he didn't realised his feelings for fl soon ( for which i almost murdered him) . intelligent- because he learnt from last mistake and tried to correct them anyway. so these two perfect but imperfect people will cause a lot of chaos and ultimately become a power couple. just you wait for it. p. s. - cough, I edited some chapters of this masterpiece too. hope i was helpful. love you bae. and sorry i gave review too late. wanted to write best❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

4yr
Sara_Peth
Sara_PethLv2

love this story. nice nice nice nice nixe nice nice nice, goood goooddd gooddd goodddd story. love love loce love love love...... love love love it

4yr
Yzra_ace_Causan
Yzra_ace_CausanLv2

i love the story. just hope that they only incounter enemies and stay believe in each other, even they havea fight, hope it wont be that lead to hating each other

4yr
Da_Ga_Paterno
Da_Ga_PaternoLv2

nicr story, hope it wont be that long so that i can finished it. its would be great. good to read and nice story line hope the would nit meet with schemme woman that destroy their relatioship to be

4yr
Sara_Peth
Sara_PethLv2

nice story to read enjoyable and goodstory line. nice to read. hope it will not be that long, or with many chapter. below 500 would be nice❤❤❤

4yr
Noname66
Noname66Lv4

There are challenges with writing style , but story is interesting. Its painfully slow but I feel author is under pressure to write more chapters so a lot of fillers there. But if you push past that, its an enjoyable story. I just wish author can be focused on work and not just increasing number of chapters. one suggestion is to keep the author and characters dialogue in writer's though section and not in the story itself, it looks weird there.

3yr
Yzra_ace_Causan
Yzra_ace_CausanLv2

nice nice nice nice. good one. hope they will not lost trust to each other becuase of the schem of their enemies. even if they face many anemies, they still support and help each other

4yr
chanduy
chanduyLv3

i am captivated by the synopsis. author, can i please ask you a question, i hate gender hipocrasy and like virgin leads. so can you please clarify for me? since ML has another woman in the past, i am a bit skeptical to read this novel. please do clarify, thanks a lot and wish you all luck

4yr
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