Review Detail of DaoistCrazy1122 in Now, where am I? [Completed]

Item: Now, where am I? [Completed]
Rating: 5

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DaoistCrazy1122Lv133yrDaoistCrazy1122

This is a good story can you use Grammarly and go back over your work for errors. There are a lot of grammar mistakes. Great potential, please don't let the main character grow too fast, it messes up a lot of stories. If you fix the grammar and keep the pacing not too fast (possibly slow it down) this will be a wonderful story. Are you going to give the mc one bloodline or multiple, and how long do you plan this story to last?

Now, where am I? [Completed]

wheretonow

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wheretonowAuthorwheretonow

I haven't planned any of it. I write it on the get go. Why characters are growing too fast? Because I asked, should I start the Avengers arc straight or give in between events some time. Most of the people answered straight to Avengers arc so, we are...

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khazarLv4khazar

cause kyle took 200 chapter and he still was far from avengers

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