Review Detail of Aaron_Stone98 in Reincarnation (Reverend Insanity Fanfic)

Item: Reincarnation (Reverend Insanity Fanfic)
Rating: 2.6

Review detail

Aaron_Stone98Lv12yrAaron_Stone98

I can't read it , it is so bad. You worship the MC of the original story too much , so your OC/SI is pretty much a wimp. You just keep praising Fang Yuan like you want to marry him or something . I get it that you like that character but what's the use of writing an SI/OC character if you are just planning on making him a wimp to worship your favourite character. Fang Yuan was a reincarnated 500 year old person but he was still in school and weak at the start , while your SI/OC has complete future knowledge and is the grandson of a Rank 3 master , yet your SI/OC fears him like he is some God . "Looked at him at the awakening ceremony and got Scared" such a wimp SI/OC.

Reincarnation (Reverend Insanity Fanfic)

Alpha_Venerable

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Alpha_VenerableAuthorAlpha_Venerable

I get your point. I realized many of the weakness of this story and hence dropped it with a sloppy ending. If I try a new one, I will definitely overcome this

2yr

Aaron_Stone98Lv1Aaron_Stone98

All the best for your new novel or fanfiction , whatever you write.

Alpha_Venerable:I get your point. I realized many of the weakness of this story and hence dropped it with a sloppy ending. If I try a new one, I will definitely overcome this

2yr

Silencer5EMR3Lv10Silencer5EMR3

There's a Fate Gu, watching over you. This reference is for the MC of this fanfic.

2yr

Ammar_SlhimLv1Ammar_Slhim

you dare not worship our benevolent and gracious MC?!?!?

2yr

Ammar_SlhimLv1Ammar_Slhim

nah you're good

Alpha_Venerable:I get your point. I realized many of the weakness of this story and hence dropped it with a sloppy ending. If I try a new one, I will definitely overcome this

2yr