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Season 1 Seirin stand no chance against Aomine and Too Academy. Aomine didn't play in the first half at all (he overslept), and still Too Academy won 112-55. You are downplaying Momoi and the other players too. They were able to shut down Seirin players completely except Kuroko. Aomine didn't even have to use zone in this first match. You can't bridge such a gap just by introducing a new character (Ogiwara) in the Seirin team.

And then Ogiwara enters the zone and stops Aomine and Seirin miraculously wins. Lol.

Hey Author, nice idea for fanfiction. I have just one suggestion, don't make your MC a bystander in the story(standing outside during the first mission, getting knocked out during the second mission). If you do that not only will the readers lose interest, you will lose interest in writing the story too. As for MC powers I suggest that instead of copying ability, let MC have either Park Ilpyo or Jade Emperor's powers.

You can look up the powers of Witch Queen from Black clover or your can check the power system of Kekkai Sensen.

Maybe the MC can have an RCT like the Witch Queen from black clover so Kokichi won't have to go to Mahito to get healed.

Make it so that the MC is suspicious and follows them to the battle between Mahito and Kokichi with gojo or Yuki. MechaMiwa please 😂. Kokichi has a lot of potential, even Kenjaku believes that he is almost special grade during the fight.

Thanks for the chapter, will the MC save Kokichi Muta(Mechamaru)?

Will he be like Marvel's In-Betweener?

This used to be one of my favourites, and one of the best Pokemon Fanfiction on this site. But the quality of the story has fallen a lot in the later chapters. It has almost become a crack fic at this point. The MC is just too arrogant and narcissistic at this point. The MC has just become Superman that punches and defeats any and all Pokemon. The MC has taken "gotta catch 'em all" too seriously and has started catching groups of Pokemon, any Pokemon that he sees.

They are Canon.

Overall this is a very good Fanfic. The only problem I have with this fanfic is that the author chooses to make Superman as strong as his comic counterpart but makes the Marvel characters as strong as their movie counterparts. Both DC and Marvel characters are nerfed in the movies. You can look at- 1. Immortal Hulk/Worldbreaker Hulk, 2. Cosmic King Thor/Rune King Thor, 3. Iron man God Killer Armour Mark 2(Model 61)/Iron man God-Buster armour(Model 63)/ Iron Man Ziran Armour.

The original Ultron created by Hank Pym in the comics was an even bigger menace than the one in the MCU movie 😂. I think that's why fans didn't like the movie Ultron. The movie Ultron was corrupted by the Mind Stone, the Ultron in comics is pure evil and is almost impossible to kill, he always comes back. The only good Ultron I can think of is actually the Ultron from MCU Earth-838. You should check out MCU Earth-838 because it is definitely the best Universe for MCU/X-men/Inhumans/Fantastic Four crossovers.

The story progression is bad. The main character is unlikable. Decisions of Background characters don't make sense. Author is an Iron man hater, makes him act out of character and technically makes him the villain.

Is this fanfic universe based on MCU Earth-838? Ultron is good in that universe, X-men are there, Fantastic four are there, Inhumans are there.

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