Review Detail of Walking_The_Path in Reincarnation (Reverend Insanity Fanfic)
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I was able to read close to 200 chapters but could not force myself to read further mc is like a brick emotionally so I could not continue reading because of that
Reincarnation (Reverend Insanity Fanfic)
Alpha_Venerable
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From my understanding emotions are a key framework for a audience to connect to a main character that's where I hit a wall in your novel a mc can make or break a novel
Alpha_Venerable:Sad to hear that. I based the MC on as realistic setting as I could write bringing the real thoughts I would have if I did reincarnate to gu world. But I can see it gets boring quickly. Another reason for me to not continue
I don't know if you realized my comment was intented for the original revendred insanity not your fanfiction sorry for the mess up
Alpha_Venerable:Sad to hear that. I based the MC on as realistic setting as I could write bringing the real thoughts I would have if I did reincarnate to gu world. But I can see it gets boring quickly. Another reason for me to not continue
ohh. I think you shoudk continue the original. The mc is not a brick emotionally. He had lived long and doesn't care about anything now. Also, you will love the story as it moves forward
Walking_The_Path:I don't know if you realized my comment was intented for the original revendred insanity not your fanfiction sorry for the mess up
That's the problem he does not care about anything the reason I can't relate to him in anyway? trust I tired to read more it was just painful and unenjoyable for me
Alpha_Venerable:ohh. I think you shoudk continue the original. The mc is not a brick emotionally. He had lived long and doesn't care about anything now. Also, you will love the story as it moves forward
Walking_The_Path:That's the problem he does not care about anything the reason I can't relate to him in anyway? trust I tired to read more it was just painful and unenjoyable for me