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Eeshoo97
Eeshoo97Lv152yr
2022-06-14 08:20

Absolutely love this book! I loved watching the MCs personality change from a young teen stuck with romantic issues taking on challenges he wasn’t prepared for to a grown adult capable of putting the greater planetary-scale interests before his own personal affairs. The early chapters may be a bit hard to read but if you put yourself in the MCs shoes during your hormonal years, I’m sure you will be able to relate to his issues. The overall plot is much more serious and bigger than the MC and so it’s worthwhile to stick to the book and keep reading. You won’t regret it. The writing quality has improved by leaps and bounds over the course of the book and the story is not very predictable making you wait to see how things actually turn out. The author is very interactdive in the discord community which makes it a very refreshing reading experience, you should definitely check it out.

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Ornoth
OrnothLv13

At what chapter does the MC get better and less frustrating?

Rahul_Chaurasiya_7551
Rahul_Chaurasiya_7551Lv4

after 900 chapters

Ornoth:At what chapter does the MC get better and less frustrating?
Ornoth
OrnothLv13

I'm not reading 900 chapters of pure torture.

Rahul_Chaurasiya_7551:after 900 chapters
Paulo_Miranda_9653
Paulo_Miranda_9653Lv1

Tá porra então eu passo essa tchau kkkkkkk

Rahul_Chaurasiya_7551:after 900 chapters
DrGrace
DrGraceLv14

That's what i thought 😂

Ornoth:I'm not reading 900 chapters of pure torture.
good_ness
good_nessLv4

to be very Frank, the book is unpredictable

Prince_Rajpoot_0838
Prince_Rajpoot_0838Lv3

well putting his personal affair back of mind is not appreciated thing. It is just frustrating. I don't know about you but i don't like too much righteous and pushover protagonist.

Prince_Rajpoot_0838
Prince_Rajpoot_0838Lv3

hey bro can you tell me if silva revived or not?

Rahul_Chaurasiya_7551:after 900 chapters
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CanYouMakeItClear
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James_Schiavone
James_SchiavoneLv4
DeleTED
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