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James_Schiavone
James_SchiavoneLv43yr
2021-05-03 03:16

I find the world to be great and many characters are great but i had to stop about chp 120. our MC is told how weak he is and almost dies multiple times before, yet he took the risk to fight knights he just saw fight very well. even after he thinks that old knight that trained his dad is a bad dude he walks right up to them and ask them , the dragon told him many times to not get in any dumb things until hes stronger. To me the MC is odd, we are told he likes to read and study at the start of the story, yet he seems dumb. after meeting granny he should had know he is not close to being that strong

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MAIDENLESS
MAIDENLESSLv1

mc is not dumb lol author is dumb

HeatoN_Lee
HeatoN_LeeLv1

He wasn't in any trouble while fighting those knights. If he got captured then because of how little time he had left to go back to academy, he would have been summoned even if he was in chains. Plus, he only wanted answers from that old guy and because of how little time he had left - he didn't care of how many knights there were , and when he got the answers, the old knight wouldn't just let him go. So fighting them was the only way.

boov
boovLv5

reading doesnt make you smart...studying provides knowledge but that is all...

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CanYouMakeItClear
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DeleTED
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