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Aysel_Inara
Aysel_InaraLv103yr
2021-04-08 20:36

We never like the 2nd woman and the person whom we regard as homewrecker but have you ever heard his/her side of story? NO! This work specially highlights the story of a passionate lover, a witty and powerful lady who will go through lengths to get back what's hers. She's in love with ML (who marries another woman) but believe me as far as I can feel it....my hunch is that MLs wife is the villain whereas the FL who appears to be a bad person is actually a victim. And if this is accurate guess then author has successfully created the hype and understanding of the characters. They appear naive but accordingly situation, the development of emotions is wonderful and that's what drives the plotline up to fuller. Don't worry about the quality its highly readable (more than that) and not to forget the smexy cover. ☆_☆

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PayalSinghRajput
PayalSinghRajputAuthor

Aww... Baby, Thank you so much ❤️

Eternal_Sunshine4
Eternal_Sunshine4Lv12

Cheating is NEVER okay. Period.

Aysel_Inara
Aysel_InaraLv10

Yup it is never okay, that's not what I meant though.🤣🤣

Eternal_Sunshine4:Cheating is NEVER okay. Period.
Pema_Khando_Grg
Pema_Khando_GrgLv3

I just hope Jason doesn't fall over rose and venelina get her first love

SHIVAM_Chouksey
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Tbh, this is my first time writing a review for a contemporary romance novel. I haven't read many so there might be mistakes in my judgment. I started this novel not expecting much, but as I read till mid-way, I put all the thoughts behind my back and decided to stop it. Bcz, this novel doesn't suit my taste. Xavier, the ML, isn't that interesting of a character. He just accepts to marry some random woman his father choses. He isn't a nine-year-old kid that can't think for himself, right? He had Valentina who was his lover since high school or it says. Their bond isn't something that can't be easily broken by a third wheeler. Tears start streaming down his face for who knows how many times. Each line I read makes it more awkward and awkward. It would be better if the author uses other words to describe his pain. Reading the same lines doesn't help but irritate for someone like me. Letting these all slide, what surprised me the most is the wedding night which goes smoothly. Really smooth. I was taking time, keenly going through those lines expecting him to reject or something along those lines, but it still didn't happen to lead to disappointment. And the next day he goes to Valentina's office, telling her to break their relationship. I could go on and on explaining many things. But I'm really sleepy and most of it, tired now. In short, I appreciate the author for writing this novel. Don't take it to heart whatever I said. I just want to advise you to make it interesting for a fellow reader such as I, to read. It would be better if you increase the chapter length because everything I read could be sum into 200 words. Write something which makes the readers react and feel the emotions coursing through the characters. Not just plain one. I couldnt' give more stars and this is the maximum I could. Author, if you reply, type in lesser words bcz I can't read and understand quickly. Try to sum it up in 100 words if possible. That if, you reply. Author name is the same of a popular actress I know. I admire her a lot. Good luck!

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