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PayalSinghRajput
PayalSinghRajputAuthor3yr
2021-01-02 14:27

Hello to the lovely readers. Thank you for checking out the reviews before reading the novel. So, yeah... I am sure, looking at the Title, you all might think that this story looks like an 18+ rated Story and that is true. But, I want to tell you that mostly, this story moves around revenge. A second woman who wants someone else husband. But why? What did he do to her that makes her want him when she can have any other man? A Strong Female Lead who is ready to face any circumstances just to make him hers! I hope you do not judge my novel before reading it! I promise you that this novel will attract you. Just read free chapters and if you still think, This novel is not your cup of tea then please leave it. Love, Author ❤

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Suzzypop
SuzzypopLv4

the storyline is pretty good but u need to work on the translation...it would make it perfect

PayalSinghRajput
PayalSinghRajputAuthor

Thank you! Happy Reading 😇

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PayalSinghRajput
PayalSinghRajputAuthor

Thank you. Will keep that in my mind. Happy Reading 😇

Suzzypop:the storyline is pretty good but u need to work on the translation...it would make it perfect
King_75
King_75Lv1

Dear author, even if its your Creation you are spreading wrong message with your novel. Words are most powerful in this world. Even if you have created such a story you cannot tell and justify that a second woman should long for a man whom she loves. By doing so she is destroying the lives. I know writing is hard but it is not that hard to create a nice story with a good message. You might be writing for earning money here but please first go with a good message from your story. Many women lives get destroyed just because of a second women of their husbands. Many might be supporting this work but please once close your eyes and think about this. What if your husband has an ex lover and she wanted to make him his. I might be offending but this is reality and you should once think about this.

PayalSinghRajput
PayalSinghRajputAuthor

Hey, Thank you so very much for giving this novel a read. I know words are the most powerful in this world. And this creation is my hard work as well as my passion too. As you said, yes... I can't just justify that a second woman should long for a man who she loves. Absolutely true! BUT WHAT IF THE WOMAN AND THE MAN LOVING EACH OTHER FOR THE PAST 9 YEARS AND THERE IS NO MEANING FOR HIS FORCED MARRIAGE WITH AN ANOTHER WOMAN? Will you let him go just like that? Are you ready to lose your 9 years love just like that even tho he loves you? Where the ML is not at all ready to accept his marriage but with circumstances he needed to accept the fate! Yes, it's about a second woman who is ready to destroy the lives just because of a man she loves but I see nothing wrong when he got forced to marry another woman when he already loves someone. There is no meaning in the marriage where there is no love, isn't it? I think you should read the novel to know more about it but know that You don't at all know-how is the ML's wife gonna be? The wife might already be a bitch who is hell adamant about marrying a guy she likes... Key word "likes" Not love. And, You can't just tell that I am writing here for money... If my novel is giving me a bad message then I think, my novel wouldn't have got contracted in th first place. As I said already, This is a story that revolves around Revenge. Anyways, I can only tell you to read the novel first, and still, you think that the Second woman is doing wrong then I can't do anything... You need to find positive in every novel you read but not taking negatively even before you read it. Thank you once again!

King_75:Dear author, even if its your Creation you are spreading wrong message with your novel. Words are most powerful in this world. Even if you have created such a story you cannot tell and justify that a second woman should long for a man whom she loves. By doing so she is destroying the lives. I know writing is hard but it is not that hard to create a nice story with a good message. You might be writing for earning money here but please first go with a good message from your story. Many women lives get destroyed just because of a second women of their husbands. Many might be supporting this work but please once close your eyes and think about this. What if your husband has an ex lover and she wanted to make him his. I might be offending but this is reality and you should once think about this.
King_75
King_75Lv1

Then isn't it the mistake of man who make situations like this? It happens in real life. Your book is just giving wrong message that's why I mentioned it. Well, readers like this kind of stuff so good luck with your work. Even if those situations arise, the second woman is destroying many lives with her. Yes I read your novel and then I came to the point which make me reply to you. Those 9 years were available to man but he cannot do anything. So, isn't that man culprit in this story and now his lover wants him to be back. She should have done that before the marriage not after the marriage because that's not a good thing. Even if you are forcefully married you cannot destroy lives. The novel is giving the wrong idea that if you love someone get back him at any cost even if it means to be the second woman of his and destroy the life of first woman. Sometimes sacrifice is also the answer and you can get many beautiful things in your way. That's my point.

PayalSinghRajput:Hey, Thank you so very much for giving this novel a read. I know words are the most powerful in this world. And this creation is my hard work as well as my passion too. As you said, yes... I can't just justify that a second woman should long for a man who she loves. Absolutely true! BUT WHAT IF THE WOMAN AND THE MAN LOVING EACH OTHER FOR THE PAST 9 YEARS AND THERE IS NO MEANING FOR HIS FORCED MARRIAGE WITH AN ANOTHER WOMAN? Will you let him go just like that? Are you ready to lose your 9 years love just like that even tho he loves you? Where the ML is not at all ready to accept his marriage but with circumstances he needed to accept the fate! Yes, it's about a second woman who is ready to destroy the lives just because of a man she loves but I see nothing wrong when he got forced to marry another woman when he already loves someone. There is no meaning in the marriage where there is no love, isn't it? I think you should read the novel to know more about it but know that You don't at all know-how is the ML's wife gonna be? The wife might already be a bitch who is hell adamant about marrying a guy she likes... Key word "likes" Not love. And, You can't just tell that I am writing here for money... If my novel is giving me a bad message then I think, my novel wouldn't have got contracted in th first place. As I said already, This is a story that revolves around Revenge. Anyways, I can only tell you to read the novel first, and still, you think that the Second woman is doing wrong then I can't do anything... You need to find positive in every novel you read but not taking negatively even before you read it. Thank you once again!
Ms_Anonymous
Ms_AnonymousLv5

Hey dear, Woah... I can see u r reading this amazing book and sharing your pov. It's good to share your pov. So that author can think in more than one way. And can I ask you to think this story a bit differently? A woman loved a guy for nine years and don't even know about their marriage till he got married And that to her schoolmate, who always hated her. Her classmate loves snatching her things and now she snatched her man. She will be provoked obviously. And don't you think she is blinded by love and revenge. And yes, I agree with you the fault lies with the man. If he is strong and stood up for himself and his love it wouldn't happen. But... it also meant he is not one for the FL She cannot get out of her shell in a single night, right? She has to know how wrong she is. The FL has to know he is not meant for him. The nine years of their love might not be love but a companionship. Everything takes time to solve, right? Of course, whatever you said is reality. But when a person is obsessed with love and couldn't let it go needs a person to comfort or something to comfort themselves. Also, here the author is saying we should let things happen naturally. When you force them to happen, the people or things involved in it should bear the result, right? Don't you agree?

King_75:Then isn't it the mistake of man who make situations like this? It happens in real life. Your book is just giving wrong message that's why I mentioned it. Well, readers like this kind of stuff so good luck with your work. Even if those situations arise, the second woman is destroying many lives with her. Yes I read your novel and then I came to the point which make me reply to you. Those 9 years were available to man but he cannot do anything. So, isn't that man culprit in this story and now his lover wants him to be back. She should have done that before the marriage not after the marriage because that's not a good thing. Even if you are forcefully married you cannot destroy lives. The novel is giving the wrong idea that if you love someone get back him at any cost even if it means to be the second woman of his and destroy the life of first woman. Sometimes sacrifice is also the answer and you can get many beautiful things in your way. That's my point.
King_75
King_75Lv1

I completely agree with you and the author too. Then maybe change synopsis because it is giving a wrong idea. Like in you can add these things which will create lesser confusion in the new readers. Of course story is different but the way it is depicting things in a few chapters, giving me a wrong idea. Of course, it is the story of author so its upto her how she will mend the story. But hope the second woman does not do anything wrong which affects his official wife. The ml should be punished for playing with second woman. Mistakes happen and one should not repeat that neither run for a man who could not stop his own marriage.

Ms_Anonymous:Hey dear, Woah... I can see u r reading this amazing book and sharing your pov. It's good to share your pov. So that author can think in more than one way. And can I ask you to think this story a bit differently? A woman loved a guy for nine years and don't even know about their marriage till he got married And that to her schoolmate, who always hated her. Her classmate loves snatching her things and now she snatched her man. She will be provoked obviously. And don't you think she is blinded by love and revenge. And yes, I agree with you the fault lies with the man. If he is strong and stood up for himself and his love it wouldn't happen. But... it also meant he is not one for the FL She cannot get out of her shell in a single night, right? She has to know how wrong she is. The FL has to know he is not meant for him. The nine years of their love might not be love but a companionship. Everything takes time to solve, right? Of course, whatever you said is reality. But when a person is obsessed with love and couldn't let it go needs a person to comfort or something to comfort themselves. Also, here the author is saying we should let things happen naturally. When you force them to happen, the people or things involved in it should bear the result, right? Don't you agree?
Ms_Anonymous
Ms_AnonymousLv5

Aww... You are too awesome for pointing out the mistakes. The author took this maybe bcuz in every story this second woman leads a pitiful life while here the FL is fighting for herself. She is saying this because maybe she wants to prepare her readers mentally. We don't know her thoughts, let's hope for the best. Good morning by the way🥰😍

King_75:I completely agree with you and the author too. Then maybe change synopsis because it is giving a wrong idea. Like in you can add these things which will create lesser confusion in the new readers. Of course story is different but the way it is depicting things in a few chapters, giving me a wrong idea. Of course, it is the story of author so its upto her how she will mend the story. But hope the second woman does not do anything wrong which affects his official wife. The ml should be punished for playing with second woman. Mistakes happen and one should not repeat that neither run for a man who could not stop his own marriage.
Readable
ReadableLv15

His novel isn't about real life, and 90% of the stuff written would never happen in real life. So no one is taking it to heart.

King_75:Dear author, even if its your Creation you are spreading wrong message with your novel. Words are most powerful in this world. Even if you have created such a story you cannot tell and justify that a second woman should long for a man whom she loves. By doing so she is destroying the lives. I know writing is hard but it is not that hard to create a nice story with a good message. You might be writing for earning money here but please first go with a good message from your story. Many women lives get destroyed just because of a second women of their husbands. Many might be supporting this work but please once close your eyes and think about this. What if your husband has an ex lover and she wanted to make him his. I might be offending but this is reality and you should once think about this.
King_75
King_75Lv1

It happens Sir in real life .

Readable:His novel isn't about real life, and 90% of the stuff written would never happen in real life. So no one is taking it to heart.
hellokittysmall
hellokittysmallLv4

Actualy there are no ex- who is capable to snach somebody's wife or husband. It is called kidnapping. It tooks 2 hands to clap. I realy want to laugh then I heard of bad woman who took the innocent husband from family.

MasterMonsoon
MasterMonsoonLv13

That's not true. Many novels on here are contracted. Like ones were rapists get away with rape. Women fall in love with abusive partners. And yes a man should be faithful to his wife even if he doesn't love her. He choose to be obedient to the arrangement rather then stand-up for his feelings. That means that the other women, first love, etc wasn't the most important thing her his life. Therefore, why would she want to be with him?

PayalSinghRajput:Hey, Thank you so very much for giving this novel a read. I know words are the most powerful in this world. And this creation is my hard work as well as my passion too. As you said, yes... I can't just justify that a second woman should long for a man who she loves. Absolutely true! BUT WHAT IF THE WOMAN AND THE MAN LOVING EACH OTHER FOR THE PAST 9 YEARS AND THERE IS NO MEANING FOR HIS FORCED MARRIAGE WITH AN ANOTHER WOMAN? Will you let him go just like that? Are you ready to lose your 9 years love just like that even tho he loves you? Where the ML is not at all ready to accept his marriage but with circumstances he needed to accept the fate! Yes, it's about a second woman who is ready to destroy the lives just because of a man she loves but I see nothing wrong when he got forced to marry another woman when he already loves someone. There is no meaning in the marriage where there is no love, isn't it? I think you should read the novel to know more about it but know that You don't at all know-how is the ML's wife gonna be? The wife might already be a bitch who is hell adamant about marrying a guy she likes... Key word "likes" Not love. And, You can't just tell that I am writing here for money... If my novel is giving me a bad message then I think, my novel wouldn't have got contracted in th first place. As I said already, This is a story that revolves around Revenge. Anyways, I can only tell you to read the novel first, and still, you think that the Second woman is doing wrong then I can't do anything... You need to find positive in every novel you read but not taking negatively even before you read it. Thank you once again!
jilahmyang
jilahmyangLv13

i like the FL but if ever xavier is actually the male lead i dont like his character here or should i say dont like him to end up with the FL..cause FL deserves more .a man who can actually love her wholeheartedly and a man who dont easily give up on her . and xavier is already married to the b**ch so let it be ays! that is his fault anyway for always following his father decisions..he is puppy and puppet of his father .He always do's and dont's of what his father words want to do , even it is not good at all... seriously ML are you still a child !?hahahaha nah! he is not independent at all a weak man ,a man who cant stand for his love one is not good for the FL aw charot! my pov.

Ninalizia_Johnson
Ninalizia_JohnsonLv10

THANK YOU for this comment! straight facts!

King_75:Dear author, even if its your Creation you are spreading wrong message with your novel. Words are most powerful in this world. Even if you have created such a story you cannot tell and justify that a second woman should long for a man whom she loves. By doing so she is destroying the lives. I know writing is hard but it is not that hard to create a nice story with a good message. You might be writing for earning money here but please first go with a good message from your story. Many women lives get destroyed just because of a second women of their husbands. Many might be supporting this work but please once close your eyes and think about this. What if your husband has an ex lover and she wanted to make him his. I might be offending but this is reality and you should once think about this.
scarlettben
scarlettbenLv13

Totally agree and that's why this authors careless attitude surprises me. She might be from a safe family and thinks stuff like this happens in real life, but it does and it ruins the lives and confidence of many. She should see how many cases are filed in police stations for adultery and change her mind. She is reckless in her pursuit to earn money.

King_75:It happens Sir in real life .
scarlettben
scarlettbenLv13

Who are you? And when did I attack her personal life? She's deleting my comments and you answer for her. Are you her alt-account?

scarlettben
scarlettbenLv13

Not only this author writes a morally corrupt story, she also attacks valid criticisms about her grammar using her alt accounts. I have no words to spare for these kind of people.

scarlettben
scarlettbenLv13

Dreamygurl7968 is this authors alt account she uses to attack people who give opinions she doesn't like about her story.

PayalSinghRajput
PayalSinghRajputAuthor

Excuse me? Why are you just messing up with me? If you don't like to read my novel, then it's totally fine with it. I am not at all forcing you to read mine. It just a recommendation and you can't just fire on me telling that this novel is just a useless one to read. You don't at all have any idea how hard it is to come up with such idea and write it. And I am proud of my novel. I have spent many sleepless night to write it. It doesn't matter if it's involve cheating on something. As you said, There are so many cases going on right? Well, no body cares or can do about it. Neither you. It just relalistic things. I just took a base story of what is going on in this society. And not everything happens and solve in one night. Everything needs time. You can't tell how the novel ends. Can you? No! I have my plans to make my novel better. But you are being rude and harsh right now. You are just sitting behind a computer screen and commenting without knowing what a person is going through. And please, I Am 20. Will turn 21. I don't have to tell you everything and you have no right to point out about earing money here... It doesn't matter to you! If you think, my grammar is vocabulary sucks then it's alright but for you're information... The first 20 chapter's are edited with an editor and it's still under Editing. And if you don't like to re this cheating and then please... Do leave reading this novel. Thank you and hope you understand. 🙏🏻

scarlettben:Who are you? And when did I attack her personal life? She's deleting my comments and you answer for her. Are you her alt-account?
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