what a horrible story, just one protagonist distributing powers to asta etc, just a whore from asta, actor at most is 15 years old,why practically every story on this site has a protagonist distributing powers and following the main character? beta mcs

You should use this as wallpaper

After reading up to CH 9, I understand a little bit .. MC is basically a good person, who spreads goodness here and there and has a hero syndrome .. Well he's a good person .. yes, a good person .. So as a selfish person, well that's it.. there are no comments .. So I just took the middle value ..

Great story so far, not much I can say except how good this is and I'm loving it. keep up the great work, hopefully one day we can get double releas 🤞

it's just another primitive piece of garbage where the retarded mc gets whatever he wants. The "harem" is a gotta catch-em-all basic, overused and ful of cliches the members have low to no personality. Honestly it's better to just read something else because this "fanfic" it's just garbage.

En, nothing much I can say I'd say it's good, it's not like I dislike Beta MC as long as it's tolerable. But anyways I like the story is going that's all, but I advise you not to make the Protagonist too much stuck up with his family thing, it's a hindrance to his advancement.

Sorry for mistakes English is not my language. The author I have a question why did you even write this garbage? To clarify, I gave a chance to this work 5 times while reading. Feeling as if spat in the face after reading. The hero of your work has a feeling that he fell headlong down at birth, otherwise the stupidity of his actions is difficult to clarify. He has many powerful skills, his soul absorbs the experience, knowledge, skills, and worldview of the Jade Emperor, if he himself cannot use his head so let his wife, the goddess, lead him by the hand, she will definitely not be so stupid. After all, a more powerful soul should have pressed on him, and in 9 years since at least some action began, he should not have changed so sickly, we are not talking about the fact that he is a newborn, he lived 1 life experience that he knows 2 skills put pressure on the mind and thinking, nothing of his former self would have remained during this time. The action also raises questions if you do the character with the manners of the protagonist, justice, honor, and in general then you had to replace him with the main character of the main work, and so he drags behind the hero of the work helps and teaches him if the reader would like something like that he would have read the original. The meaning of reading such a work is 0. Honestly, I do not understand all these fan fictions that are written by the current so that the hero created by the author of this fan fiction would walk next to the hero of the original work, then it makes sense to read it if it is like the original of the current is compressed and the main characters are larger.

ThIs is his and charlottes daughter

past tense is messed up. grammar is pretty bad for a rewrite. The plot is questionable and flawed .