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CharlottesLv134yr
2020-09-27 19:57

En, nothing much I can say I'd say it's good, it's not like I dislike Beta MC as long as it's tolerable. But anyways I like the story is going that's all, but I advise you not to make the Protagonist too much stuck up with his family thing, it's a hindrance to his advancement.

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TheDNAlien
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he definitely gets something 'up' in his family 🤣

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ZikAkassi
ZikAkassiLv1

Sorry for mistakes English is not my language. The author I have a question why did you even write this garbage? To clarify, I gave a chance to this work 5 times while reading. Feeling as if spat in the face after reading. The hero of your work has a feeling that he fell headlong down at birth, otherwise the stupidity of his actions is difficult to clarify. He has many powerful skills, his soul absorbs the experience, knowledge, skills, and worldview of the Jade Emperor, if he himself cannot use his head so let his wife, the goddess, lead him by the hand, she will definitely not be so stupid. After all, a more powerful soul should have pressed on him, and in 9 years since at least some action began, he should not have changed so sickly, we are not talking about the fact that he is a newborn, he lived 1 life experience that he knows 2 skills put pressure on the mind and thinking, nothing of his former self would have remained during this time. The action also raises questions if you do the character with the manners of the protagonist, justice, honor, and in general then you had to replace him with the main character of the main work, and so he drags behind the hero of the work helps and teaches him if the reader would like something like that he would have read the original. The meaning of reading such a work is 0. Honestly, I do not understand all these fan fictions that are written by the current so that the hero created by the author of this fan fiction would walk next to the hero of the original work, then it makes sense to read it if it is like the original of the current is compressed and the main characters are larger.

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