Hello readers, I wrote this review after writing 120+ chapters and read hundreds of comments. So here is my honest review on my own work. 1. Slow paced As I wrote in the synopsis, I write this story not only to become where the mc is hungry for power. I tried to make this novel as realistic as possible, including daily life conversations, characters' backstory, and characters interactions. Even in the end, the mc still hungry for power to survive, but at least I want you to experience what it's like to live in a fantasy world. 2. World Background & Character Design While the world and characters are the one I am confident with. I took a lot of time on them, but you can be the judge of that. 3. Writing Quality Because this is my first novel, I'm trying my hardest to work on grammar, sentences, punctuation and etc. But even I do that, there should be some mistakes I didn't notice, please be forgive as I'm still learning English as English is my second language. Please give the novel a try and I hope you can enjoy the adventure of Desmond.
DragonKnov
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LIKEAlright.... i will give it try Once i got enough time.....but i would have tempted to try it as soon as possible if it had romance.... sorry about thisđ but i am a abide romance novel reader but not those with drama. but i bookmarked it i will give it try Once i have time..... Look forward to reading ur novel.
DragonKnov:Ah i see, everyone have their preference. I just hope you give a try đ
john_someone:Question Will he be Building The mafia in fantasy world?image
Before I spend my coins on this story, will there be a harem dear author? I understand that you donât want to spoil the plot, but before I devote my time and money to a story that I consider promising, I would like to know it. I have no desire to have to drop the novel because the MC suddenly finds itself surrounded by females that wet like fountains at each of its actions. Also, I donât think Iâm the only one who wants to know this point before I commit to the long term. Thanks!
It_s_JODnotGOD:Before I spend my coins on this story, will there be a harem dear author? I understand that you donât want to spoil the plot, but before I devote my time and money to a story that I consider promising, I would like to know it. I have no desire to have to drop the novel because the MC suddenly finds itself surrounded by females that wet like fountains at each of its actions. Also, I donât think Iâm the only one who wants to know this point before I commit to the long term. Thanks!
Will there be romance you dont have to say when or if there is more than 1 girl because i could go either way on harem but there has to be at least some romance between the mc and a female lead that lead to marriage or something like that.
DragonKnov:ah... it still hard to answer , why don't follow the story first and then guess it [img=recommend]
Matt_pike:Will there be romance you dont have to say when or if there is more than 1 girl because i could go either way on harem but there has to be at least some romance between the mc and a female lead that lead to marriage or something like that.
KingofWood:this author dodges the question in a very annoying manner ahahha
Eroos:Good novel #TeamHarem What typical young mafia master doesn't have his harem? It would be absurd not to have him, he is like a swordsman without a sword