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In the face of imminent death it is difficult to have a rational mind. Keep in mind that the protagonist practically lived a whole boring life, without even having the slightest emotion or doing something as normal as watching a movie. For him it's the first time he's done anything besides working or studying, so his weak heart couldn't quite take it in its stride.
mmmm, I don't think I explained it well. I was trying to say that the child is old enough to get married, but instead of saying years, I used moons. I find it a bit more realistic considering that they are in a backward time, where it is believed that historically the calendar was ruled by the moon.
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fixed. Thks
Error in translation, from time to time, thanks for the warning.
This novel was planned for a long time before I started writing it. I never really had any major obstacles when it came to writing, so I never even had the thought of using AI.
I've written a little bit but I feel quite stagnant in the story, so it's unlikely that I'll make an update in the near future.
fixed, thx.
Long ago he realized that his sense of justice would only bring trouble to him and his loved ones, so he mostly put it aside and does whatever it takes to keep his life stable and secure.
I have 4 novels planned, in fact I wrote a chapter of each one of them and I have the story written down so I don't forget it. One of those novels is the continuation of this one and the other 3 will be out of this universe, one of these days I'll be ready to upload them.
A while ago I started to pay more attention to those details, the next chapters should come with less mistakes, since these are chapters I wrote some time ago for Patreon. I'm sorry for the mistakes, but writing, translating and editing at the same time is not easy, even more if you don't speak English.