The Most Satisfied Reincarnate

An exciting story depicting the reincarnation of a protagonist who manages to evade death, but in a rather unique way. Though there may be small mistakes here and there, I don't have a problem overlooking them, as the story itself is quite enjoyable to read.

It is a great start. But I don't understand why you put fast pass this early in the novel unless it going to be a medium short novel. If you are going write at least to more than 400 chapter then start the fast pass maybe around chapter 300 or something. But over all it is a good novel to read the system kinda remind of the 'Great Sage' from the anime called Reincarnated into a Slime. Desmond...maybe bit work on the character, I felt that you are forcing him to be closer and were is his abilities as a mafia young master? I was a bit confuse on that part.

So, this review is based on a few first chapter. I'm gonna write another chapter if I've done read enough chapter (which unfortunately cost real money, but no matter) The plot is interesting, it's like "went isekaid" story but doubt began to emerge when I saw such as system, computer language thing and how the mc is the only one that capable to control it. It's like a game-based story rather generic isekai. Maybe this is because my first time, reading a system genre. Hopefully there will be an answer about the AI-thing that helped our mc in latest chapters. Then the grammar... well, actually I have no right to "complain" about it since my story also has a lot of grammar issue. But what I can say is that keep writing.

This story has potential but what caught my eyes is the system. It's well made. I hope see more. The author can still maximize the hidden gem within this novel. I humbly suggest using grammarly and text-to-reader applications to improve flow style. I'm hoping for the best and I'll add this to my library since I love system. [img=recommend]

I love it thos is the best story Ever and i Cant stop reading it even tho i never read it i just want exp so Gimme my exp hehehehehehehe gimme

This book has potential if the grammar errors could be fixed, which is unfortunate since you are learning the language fresh. I applaud your efforts and have tried to point out some parts I could change, which hopefully helps you ! Here are my issues: 1. I would rather you combine some more of his inner dialogues rather than separating them into a single sentence/ paragraph each. However, this is more of a personal opinion, and I just want to point this out since I nearly confused his separated inner dialogues as another person speaking to him. 2. Try to use ‘suddenly’ too much as it takes out the suspense of the rest of the sentence. Allow the reader to feel it as they read and not give them an early hint of what is about to happen. 3. In terms of punctuation errors, I would look into run-on sentences as well as usage of comma since it is a common mistake for most writers to make All in all, if you can improve your English greatly, I think many readers will be fond of your book ! Keep up the good work, Author !

The story is quite intriguing with the plot being the one the draws you. Although a few mistakes, it's readable so I wouldn't emphasize on it that much. The characters are interesting to know about as well. So overall, i think ur story has potential!

The story and the world is very interesting with a lot of attention to detail. To improve, there needs to be some work done with sentence structure and having exposition be dealt out more organically like through dialogue.

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Read a bit. Seems good. Author develops story well. don't know if it is coincidence but the cover looks like Ornstein ripoff from Dark Souls.

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The author has superb writing skills. I didn't thought that it will be a reincarnation and a system novel at first! Kudos to the author! I think your book has potential and will pave well in the future. Knowing that you already was on the top 100, your novel will get more popular! And once again, good luck in the future!

Transmigration plots are my favorite and I could see that this novel has hopes of being a good novel in the long run especially if the grammar hiccups are fixed which can be done with any editing tool. The system seems interesting so far and looking forward to seeing the MC develop more.

I don't know why but your MC reminded me of Desmond from Vampire Diaries (the book not the movies) it's not just the name it's how they you know. It's hard to explain. Although I'm confused at the start. With the young man reference, I don't whose it's referring to. But overall you're story's awesome. You start the first chapter with action and that's super cool. Keep up the good work author!

Great story line 👏 I will he adding this gem to my library! Only had time to read so much but im excited to see where you take your readers.😇 please keep up the great work.

I’m not really into system books but this is a good read. I think you just have to show the feelings of the characters more so that the reader can relate more to what the characters are experiencing.

I have read about 5 chapters of the book. So far about 16 chapters have been published. The story begins well and is quite interesting. Sounds like the early superman incident when he does not stop the thief that the thief pounces on superman's relative. Here also a thief shoots him after there is an altercation for the camera he had grabbed. The main character gets pressured and finds himself elsewhere. The stability of updates promises to be good. The story is developing nicely. The character design and world background are well made. There are some issues with grammar. The sentences need to be reworded. The matter regarding dialogues and punctuation needs to be looked into. I would suggest the downloading of Grammarly or an online grammar checker to check your text before posting each chapter. All the best, Author!

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The story is very similar to many other short novels and manga that I read so far. But as the story is still in progress I hope to see something unique that will differentiate this story from others. There were some tense issue and sentence that could be word better, but it's not going to be the end of the world if it's not fix. But what kind of bother me is the amount of bracket used, it's kind of distracting. But I understood this is something that the author needs. In overall, the story is not only compelling, but filled with an interesting setting.

Hey it's really nice book...👏👏👏The introduction of characters is really good. The dying of MC is really like shock when you least expect it. Good work author...You did really good job...👍👍👏 All the best.👍