Review Detail of SolAce in The Most Satisfied Reincarnate

This book has potential if the grammar errors could be fixed, which is unfortunate since you are learning the language fresh. I applaud your efforts and have tried to point out some parts I could change, which hopefully helps you ! Here are my issues: 1. I would rather you combine some more of his inner dialogues rather than separating them into a single sentence/ paragraph each. However, this is more of a personal opinion, and I just want to point this out since I nearly confused his separated inner dialogues as another person speaking to him. 2. Try to use ‘suddenly’ too much as it takes out the suspense of the rest of the sentence. Allow the reader to feel it as they read and not give them an early hint of what is about to happen. 3. In terms of punctuation errors, I would look into run-on sentences as well as usage of comma since it is a common mistake for most writers to make All in all, if you can improve your English greatly, I think many readers will be fond of your book ! Keep up the good work, Author !