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Chantielu
ChantieluLv23yr
2020-12-14 08:03

I like how the plot line of the novel. From the first few paragraphs the reader was able to see the promise of the promise and what is expected in the rest of the novel. Not many writers do that here. So, I'm impressed. Great story.

The Bet

Jo_J
4.7
14 Chs

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outpost76
outpost76Lv3

While I'm not a fan of this type of stories but I enjoyed this one. I like how slow it is, it goes well with the bet they have deal with in a year. It gives a lot of time for many things to happen and I'll admit I'm a little curious about it. I don't know if the author knows that much about European history or you had to research it but it's a pretty good inclusion in the story. The writing quality is great and aside from minor mistakes in spelling or grammar I can't say much about it. Overall it's a great read

4yr

Vidit_Verma
Vidit_VermaLv4

Awesome Book !!! The novel has a good plot and is promising. I love the pacing of the novel and the way writer writes the story. The writer is successful in appealing to the readers . At last the novel is nice and will desperately wait for the next chapters to come . And hope that the writer will continue this awesome work and will evolve even more with time . Mine best wishes are always with you .[img=recommend][img=recommend]

4yr
SeverusMagicus
SeverusMagicusLv2

The story line is great, characters and the events are well written. The details of the story are outstanding. You should have a look to that novel if you like romance genre.

3yr
Nickaido
NickaidoLv4

Great story, I'm not fan of this genre but I like your Story, it has lot of potential. The only thing I can say I don't like would be how shorter some chapters are. We need a lot of chapters asap. Good chance and keep up. I've sent few stones as encouragement. More, more chapters..

4yr
Izmi_Gea
Izmi_GeaLv11

GREAT, I was wondering who Jo Jo will pick up or how the author will continue to develop the story, it makes me curious and can not wait for the next chapter as each chapter continue to draw me in[img=recommend]

3yr
ssfx3yuchens
ssfx3yuchensLv10

ssfx3yuchens here with honest review. Honestly I have to say I am quite taken with this story, it is relaxing and easy to read and understand, and the pacing is good. I enjoyed it a lot. In overall, there are a few noticeable grammatical errors in the beginning, but other than that, it's really good. The plotline looks promising[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

4yr
cherlyswan
cherlyswanLv10

I enjoyed reading the story very much. It's a slow burn. Totally worth it. I love how everything started with just a few people getting drunk reminds me of why I should stay away from alcohol😆

4yr
Amateur_Author
Amateur_AuthorLv5

The story seems fun. What i really liked about was there is a part of it which i could relate to. Trying to be perfect all the time. The Author has narrated the story in a way that any one connect to it easily. Nice work Author.👍

4yr
CoolForniteplayer
CoolForniteplayerLv3

The concept is unique and one of a kind, I must say. The story plot is different compared to all the novels on this platform. I am hoping to see many chapters in the future. Cheers! Happy writing!

4yr
Tangent34
Tangent34Lv4

Hey dear Author! Your story itself with the name is quite enticing. The story seems fun and in the end with the chapters, I felt being quite hooked, The pacing of the story is well and I wish the author all the best for the work!

3yr
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