ssfx3yuchens here with honest review. Honestly I have to say I am quite taken with this story, it is relaxing and easy to read and understand, and the pacing is good. I enjoyed it a lot. In overall, there are a few noticeable grammatical errors in the beginning, but other than that, it's really good. The plotline looks promising[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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Thank you. I expected more criticism ;)
I probably can't until I can write better. [img=update]
Jo_J:Thank you. I expected more criticism ;)
You write good, just think about greater audience scope ;)
ssfx3yuchens:I probably can't until I can write better. [img=update]
I guess I'm a cultural writer. I joined webnovel thinking it was an Asian reading community. Since they're pretty much based in Asia
Jo_J:You write good, just think about greater audience scope ;)
Plus my book is written from Chinese mindset..
Jo_J:You write good, just think about greater audience scope ;)
but that doesn't mean they people from all over the world can not read your novel ;) think about it that way
ssfx3yuchens:Plus my book is written from Chinese mindset..
not any more
ssfx3yuchens:I guess I'm a cultural writer. I joined webnovel thinking it was an Asian reading community. Since they're pretty much based in Asia
sad to know.
Jo_J:not any more
Why?
ssfx3yuchens:sad to know.
well I'm a cultural writer so I'm hoping my stories will reach more Asian readers 😂
Jo_J:Why?
it's written from an eastern point of view so they might not comprehend why the leads are thinking this way.
Jo_J:but that doesn't mean they people from all over the world can not read your novel ;) think about it that way
