Item: The Bet
Rating: 4.8
Author: Nickaido

NickaidoLv44yr

2020-11-06 06:33

Great story, I'm not fan of this genre but I like your Story, it has lot of potential. The only thing I can say I don't like would be how shorter some chapters are. We need a lot of chapters asap. Good chance and keep up. I've sent few stones as encouragement. More, more chapters..

The Bet

Jo_J

4.7

14 Chs

Liked by 3 people

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Jo_JAuthor

Thank you for your time! I know it's not easy to read something not "your cup of coffee" ;) I really appreciate it. Thanks for the stones.

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