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2021-01-05 23:14

hmmm.. this book is fun to read before the world travel happen.. but after that happen its goes down the hill.. not fun to read anymore.. the joke becoming more and more annoying.. then fairytail arc did it.. it kill my mood to read.. totally bullshit arc.. my suggestion is to make it like chat group fanfic for world travel.. you can make konosuba your homeworld.. then the rest is like how other chat group fanfic.. and tone down your joke.. just dont chuck in jojo refrence everytime.. its annoying.. because its not funny if the timing not right..

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