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Djabilong
DjabilongLv64yr
2021-01-22 21:26

(it's actually supposed to be 2,5~3 stars, but someone gotta balance things out when 20 reviews out of 50 were 5-star spammed by the exact same dude) So here's the rub - the beginning actually isn't that bad; but the further you delve, the worse it becomes. As if it wasn't enough to have a stereotypical dense japanese harem/isekai protag who gets pushed around by everyone in a kilometer radius, we also get Paimon playing as the system fairy. And if you think she was annoying in sourse material, just wait until you see her here - an annoying little shit (with IQ lower than Aqua's) that can read your mind, hates your guts, constantly blathers out all your thoughts and secrets to everyone around trying to ruin your relationships and reputation, steals from you, does nothing of use and serves no purpose apart from mooching off you while being overall an ungrateful piece of garbage. Never thought this day would come, but Umaru-bitсh finally has a competitor for the Worst Pile Of Filth Alive title. And if you thought that was bad, just wait until the actual world-hopping part starts after the first couple dozen chapters... Not gonna lie, it hurts. This is one of the rare occasions where you can see that author actually gave a shit and put in honest-to-god effort, but this just isn't good at all.

Harem System: An Implosion on This Wonderful World

Geraint124x
4.2
360 Chs

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Geraint124x
Geraint124xAuthor

Author: (0x0) Paimon: "Sorry, Author. Looks like it's Paimon fault this time." Author: "Absolutely. You're grounded inside the pot for four years." Paimon:

4yr
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Krisavq
KrisavqLv14

oof, I like it author, it's one of the only storys where I can turn off my mind and relax

Geraint124x:Author: (0x0) Paimon: "Sorry, Author. Looks like it's Paimon fault this time." Author: "Absolutely. You're grounded inside the pot for four years." Paimon:
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4yr
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TheNormalMan
TheNormalManLv14

49 times the same person reviewed

4yr
54
It_Does_Matters
It_Does_MattersLv5

FOX_ZRS :

4yr
11
Geraint124x
Geraint124xAuthor

thank you for counting.

TheNormalMan:49 times the same person reviewed
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4yr
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rizarima
rizarimaLv3

will you erase paimon to atom if we vote it?

Geraint124x:Author: (0x0) Paimon: "Sorry, Author. Looks like it's Paimon fault this time." Author: "Absolutely. You're grounded inside the pot for four years." Paimon:
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3yr
10
America_Yea
America_YeaLv3

Jus gonna point out that the average score on this site is right around 4.2 and that most of the top novels have been review bombed like that but whatevs vote how ya like I guess.

3yr
1
N0_Hope
N0_HopeLv2

Thanks for the advise... It's always good to avoid trash fanfics.

3yr
4
Yum_q327
Yum_q327Lv1

In fact, the first 20 chapters were great, but after Paimon appeared, something went wrong. Unlike the original cute and super cute Paimon, here we have some kind of nasty and annoying fairy with her appearance, but it's not only about Paimon, after 20 chapters, all the work and trust that the author has earned disappears abruptly, as if the author was replaced

2yr
7
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AzagalPlay
AzagalPlayLv14

If only the mc wasn't a simp, a beta male that is submissive to women, he kills without hesitation every male that wants to kill him, but when it's a woman, he immediatly starts to act like a brainless japanese harem mc that simps on every woman he sees. Also, it was mentioned that he had a perfect compatibility with sunshine but somehow he can't use it during the night like mael, the one who was the perfect vessel for it. that means he got nerfed. There are just too much clichés that I'm skipping paragraphs at this point. The only thing that kept me reading till now is the thanos and jojo references , but even that is getting old so I suppose I'm dropping this in a few chapters.

4yr

Geraint124x
Geraint124xAuthor

Worst Fanfic ever, it's really boring. Just drop it. 🙏👌✌️🖖😆😆😆😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣😛😝😝

4yr
Alex1911
Alex1911Lv6

Reveal spoiler

4yr
Yuuki123
Yuuki123Lv6

1st he is like everyone slave who take all work to himself 2nd his system is annoying because the painting who can know anything about me be memory or thought and she can tell anyone about it hell even she always tells what ever he thought and the system itself not make it easier the purpose is like dimensional chat group but every invitation is about make me in bad like "he you have great legs will you become my friend?" something along the line 3rd his behavior around woman is like typical Japanese beta mc being pushed around like he didn't have any back bone and and can't say no to them

4yr
It_Does_Matters
It_Does_MattersLv5

Actually it's quite enjoyable at the first dozen chapters but quickly became boring after world-hopping and forced romance. I personally don't like how Paimon just tells MC's secret to his harem and how Goddess behave like a prostitute to MC. Exclude forced romance, bad character development, unfunny emergency food(It would be better if her jokes improve), annoying and horny goddess. Everything is okay. Actually, I should rate this novel about 2 or 3 but FOX_ZRS spammed too many emoji 5-star reviews so I'll balance it with 1-star review.

4yr
Abubububu
AbubububuLv3

Reveal spoiler

4yr
Catrosious
CatrosiousLv4

Then.. i just.. Sigh~

4yr
Lize
LizeLv13

hmmm.. this book is fun to read before the world travel happen.. but after that happen its goes down the hill.. not fun to read anymore.. the joke becoming more and more annoying.. then fairytail arc did it.. it kill my mood to read.. totally bullshit arc.. my suggestion is to make it like chat group fanfic for world travel.. you can make konosuba your homeworld.. then the rest is like how other chat group fanfic.. and tone down your joke.. just dont chuck in jojo refrence everytime.. its annoying.. because its not funny if the timing not right..

4yr
Tonyorobsky
TonyorobskyLv13

It was already light in plot, char development and world background in the earlier chapters. The comedy was barely ok. After deciding to visit Wiz shop, it started to go downhill. Another story among many where the high rating is a lie because of mindless spammers and bots.

4yr
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