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2022-12-09 03:08

I dropped this fairly early on, because the MC was just too... aimless. The MC is well within the realm of godhood by chapter three, but he doesn't really do anything with his newfound powers. You're a sapling? Give yourself a shapeshifting power and turn back into a human. Wanna help the Uzumaki? Use a power that makes people decide not to attack them in the first place. Miss your family? Give yourself the right power and teleport home. Instead, the MC gives himself powers, seemingly just for the sake of having powers. And many of the powers are completely pointless. What use is "enhanced strength" when you're a tree? Planning on lifting some weights? With what arms? And you already have telekinesis! So why the enhanced strength? It boggles my mind.

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